That is so sad. I'm gonna kill you Hans. You stole the girl that belonged to Jack. Anyone who does that deserves to DIE. No one, I repeat, NO one will break Jelsa. That is just unacceptable. Ok, I calmed down now. I'm going away to cry...

This story is AMAZING! Update please! This is so good and besides, a heartbroken Jack won't do.. I need JELSA!

That's so sad! the feels, right in the feels.

Second part?

Please write the second part as soon as possible, love it! :D

I loved your story, it was really well written and everything... But I seriously hate Helsa (HansXElsa) with a passion. Just, uh, everyone's entitled to their opinions, blah blah blah. But, yeah, just hate Hans, I mean look at those sideburns. *shudders at the thought* Sorry if this sounds like "hate" because it's not meant to be. I really liked your story. It had so much feels. Can't wait for the next chapter!

pls continue

WAIT NO PLEASE WRITE THE SECIND PART PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE

this is wonderful :) i love angst

Do you take requests. Thinking..
" kiss me"
"Everybody "
" It feels so good to be bad" on Hans part."Be Prepared maybe?

AND YET ANOTHER CRUEL, BEAUTIFUL STORY FROM YOU IN THIS DAY. I AM CRYING TO DEATH. THANK YOU, ERIKA. ALWAYS LOVE YOU.

Hi, me again. Well, because of this fic, I went through my heartbreak songs playlist and thought about sharing a similar song that broke my heart just as this songfic did, it's Like We Used To by A Rocket To The Moon. Give it a listen if you're interested. Hihi. Happy listening! And do update soon! :)

I already told you while reading the songfic and helping you with some parts. You are such an awesome writer! I already told you "Hans is going to be hated, I hate him a lot so if it was another guy I even would ship for him" I loved this songfic and helping you was such an honor you know that, ;) I felt so sorry for jack but he deserves it, it reminded me of my boyfriend and how I was this close to end our relationship because he was so boring with his capitalism over flowers and all that. Elsa with hans ewww but it was cute, first time he is not such a jerk, right? ((Complete silence)) See? No one likes that bast- er- man.
What I liked the most was the song part it was so romantic, nostalgic and sad really sad (Guys should learn a lesson or two from your fic so they wont screw thier potential relationships with a nice girl) Nothing else to say, just "Let me know what will happen next" I hate hans he cant be happy, he cant!".

On another note, For the girl of Mocacchino: Thanks for the correction Im not a cofee person so I dont know anything about coffe and its variants. Is it tasty? Cofee is soooo bitter that I cant even sip with my tongue a single drop! I foccused more on the story and that it went fluidly from start to end that I totally forgot to search or google the cofee word. English is also not my first language but Ive been studying this language for almost all my life to the point of having to make again 3rd grade (Because in my country knowing more english than spanish is like hanging yourself, yup there are people like that). Thanks again and I hope it was from your liking thi story over the moca spell.

Heart-wrenchingly beautiful...*sniffle*... I might cry.

Gah! My heart. It's in shambles! Update soon!