Go kill yourself you bitch cunt this fanfic is pure trash garbage shit and all around about fanfic Go back to the shit hole you call your home where your cheap One dollar Prostitute of a mother that pussy is probably looseI and Alcoholic of a father you’re a disappointment to your family you bitch ass nigga fucking dumb ass go kill yourself

continualo normalmentee son pocas las historias donde sasuke es bueno valga la pena pero este fanfic rompe el esquema continualo me gustaria seguir leyendo tu historia

Haku acts more like Hinata's sibling than Naruto. Also with his past it should have been harder for him to ask Hinata out. Don't know about everyone else but to me it makes more sense for Hinata to have asked him out as a way to really show her increase in confidence.

Very funny thing in this chapter. Lucky for me, im stuck in home so no people will question my sanity

At least social distant not so boring

Add one member and the backup into team kekkei genkai

It's a good story, I hope it continues, a provisional team could be Karin, Ranmaru and Sakura, but they would be two useless doctors in the fight with the poor Ranmaru, but it's your decision, greetings, I hope to read you soon, bye!

Just call this Waste of Space. Danzo never deserved to Live. I would have killed him back then when he was young.

I hope people that abandon there stories watch there whole family burn to death.

the name is shinku no me

I must say that I enjoyed reading this story. I check once in a while but it's almost two years now, so here's hoping to reading the next chapter soon. Thank you for your time and efforts spent writing a good story. Kudos to you friend.

Update soon

why the fuck is that hyuuga bitch always around dumb whore always causeing problems

I hate it when Naruto is terrified of Hiashi and his threats in these stories.
Threaten the fucker back, you're a goddamn Jinchuriki, act like it. Cloak up and his pussy gentle fist can't touch youHyuga are harmless if Naruto gets pissed.
That, and honestly, these are Shinobi. Hiashi should never respect Naruto if he kowtows like a little bitch. Such a tiny threat and Naruto shakes in terror?
If he isn't scared of Kurama, and in this story Raijin/Raiju, then Hiashi is a puppy playing at being scary.
Rant over, lol. Overall I do like your story, sorry if everything I say are complaints

Take it you're changing the history of the story a fait bit?
Byakugan isn't just good against genjutsu, it is supposed to be literally immune. There is no "powerful enough" genjutsu to trick them, they no-sell it. Hope you nerf the shit out of Sharingan if you already got rid of the one thing the Byakugan is capable of.

You claim Haku is Naruto's big sister here, she sure doesn't act like it. You're writing her as Hinata's sibling, not Naruto's.