update immediately

Interesting. I hope you continue updating this...

Dammit thought Cain was from the bible, not an OC -.- disappointed

A MAZING! YOU WRITE PERFECTLY! UPDATE AGAIN SOON? PWEASE? :-) :-) :-) :-)

Awww so cute:) Keep it up, Phyre!

AWESOME

AMAZING! I LOVE THE STORY! UPDATE? PWEASE? I GIVE YOU ICE CREAM AND COOKIES! OR PIE! OR CAKE! OR JUST NORMAL FOOD! :-) :-P B-) :-D XD O:-)

I take it you haven't read the books, have you? John pluto smith kills artemis, and the authority he gains becomes his trademark. Also, I highly disaprove of taking a girl from godou's group, when there are others available to use or even *shudder* an OC. On that note, careful your OC doesn't become a mary sue, as so often can be the case. Otherwise ok

Hey Phyre, it's me again! I'm making it a goal to never miss a chapter of this. Keep it up:)

Is he a maso or something.

Excellent work.

... this kinda sucks that he still doesn't have that arm back... but it's interesting enough... oh well

more? pwease? i loooooove your story. *pouts*

amazing! its the girl who will not give back your book... atleast til i find my own...

Hey mate! Good story you got here with the potential to be awesome! Keep up the good work:)

Awesome a new campione story! I like the fact that Artemis is being used here, I don't know just felt like some cool authorities could be given. Anyways looking forward to how this story advances.