This was an enyojable read, I like the well "horror" aspect of being trapped in a fictional characters body, not only a martyr-style but one of opposite sex.
The idea of not being able to know for sure wether you are insane or not and then add the bleeding effect and top it all off with gender dysphoria. If you decide you have the drive to finish this story I will keep reading it, although I am quite bad att writing reviews so they would not happen to often from me.
In short very enyojable, love the themes at play and would love to see where you would take it if you decide to continue.

I really like this story so far and I can't wait to see more of your SI!

very nice author thank you for the story so far

Great to see this back. I loved the attention to detail, especially the little ones. The focus on that guard made your character seem a lot more human. Great writing, kept my attention the whole way through. Keep 'em coming!

You have font/text layout codes still within the text. It is unreadable. :P

I usually avoid self-insert fics like the plague, unless they're comedic parodies, but I'm glad I gave this particular story a chance. You've made it seriously interesting by having the reader essentially exchange places with Desmond instead of the typical, "AC player ends up in the 12th/15th/18th century," scenario.

While I'm enjoying what is essentially a novelisation a lot more than I thought I would, I do hope that the SI-in-Desmond can change Desmond's future actions ...

I was hugging my pillow the entire chapter because of Kadar Feels.
Gods, the Kadar Feels.
*sobs*

Liked the little thing about using, or rather NOT using the A OR B buttons, lol. As to whether or not Vidic and Lucy should talk, I think you should go with a bare minimum. Like, make it so that there's some conversation at the beginning of each session as well as the end, with occasional commentary every now and then. Like, "Come now, Subject17, is this the best you can do?" From Vidic, or something if you ever de-sync from the animus. Which I am assuming will happen a lot from the reaction of that one kill and from that last footnote in this chapter. I await your update!:D

This was very good. Please continue.

I hate self-inserts to the fibre of my being... But this story actually looks promising. :D I'll keep an eye on it for sure.

Wow. This is very well written and, in fact, surprised me at how good this is. Quite honestly, this is one of the best fanfics I've read in awhile. Please continue, ill be patiently waiting!

This is awesome, a nice take on a self-insert! XD I await your update.