beautiful , damn beautiful chapter , loved it . this is the best ending to a lovely and sweet story . thank you so much for giving us this cute story .

damn great read , i wished the fight scene were shorter and we had more cute scenes . well anyway this was truly a great story and my first natsu\chelia fic. loved it .

great chapter but if you have kept it pure romance and no fighting it would have been better .

damn sweet chapter , loved it . they are so cute together .

great and a funny chapter , liked it .

great chapter .finally will see some natsu\chelia.

good chapter . but i have to say at that time Jura was not the weakest saint he was ranked 5th and erza was not at a wizard saint level at that time ,, Mira even said if she and erza together fought Jura they were not sure they could win . other than that good chapter .

great first chapter , liked it . this will be my first time reading a story with natsu\Chelia pairing . looks promising .

Dude, i expected a little more of development, but you did marry them in the last chapter. Chapter 7 was a disaster to tell the truth. You mashed up all dialogs, wrote in the center, but you fixed everything in chapter 8. Nice story.

Very nice. Interesting ship

This was wonderful!

The best. The last chapter was amazing

Amazing

I think I cried

Hey awesome story can u do a natsu x wendy fanfic plz