Great storries. I had a hard time picture Stefan though. Personality this story made me picture Dr. Carlisle and the others Edward.

Amazing as always! Got every element in there and the emotions are perfectly portrayed! Can't ask for a better one shot, but I wanted more, damnit! Keep up the great work and can't wait to read the next one shot! :D

Absolutely AMAZING! The emotions are portrayed perfectly. The scene is paced, for lack of a better word, perfectly. And the fact that it's a steamy Stefan and Bella one shot makes this story even better! I loved it and I can't wait to read what you write next! Love ya, sis, and fantastic job!

i love it

Love it.
Please update soon!

I just have one word for this... WOW! It went from great to fantastic to MUY CALIENTE! You had a great mix of spice in Medium and then went on to take things to another level and it was very, VERY good! You are doing a fantastic job and I can't wait to read your next assignment!

Everything about this scene was spot on and it was great to read through it :) It was just right in my book :) Keep up the great work, my dear! :D

Considering I know where this is coming from, I know how hot and heavy this scene got and how it was greatly executed! You did a great job of portraying Stefan and how things were handled and it was fantastic! Keep on working hard and you will write some amazing stuff in the future!

Wow. I was worried that medium was too spicy but you really outdid yourself in the spicy! Job well done!

There was no obvious indication you struggled with anything in this. HOT! *fans self* Loved all three ways you served this up!

Okay, I am getting attached tot his pairing rather quickly. I liked this very much. The way you described her clumsiness was great. Then the kiss; his taste and her thoughts were great! I look forward to reading more.

This was steamy goodness. I enjoyed the pairing very much. This was extremely passionate and left me wanting more.

Talk about hot. This was so hot chapter that i am actually sweating

UGH! That was so good. I was a lil worried at the Medium level thinking it was a tad too spicy but then BAM! You burned my throat with that Spicy level.

This was great! I loved the storyline behind it!

SmutU Constructive Criticism - The only thing I really wanted more of was B's reaction to when they first kiss. Those first few brief seconds and what's running through her mind, what they're doing, etc.