Reviews for My New World
Guest chapter 14 . 7/28
I beg continue
Reaperdan81 chapter 14 . 7/4
Absolute garbage
Reaperdan81 chapter 6 . 7/4
Why has nami not joined yet ?
Guest chapter 14 . 5/27
Will you continue this or not?
NHarem Foreva chapter 3 . 9/24/2019
That entire scene with Alvida made no sense. It literally looks like you wrote it out, then cut out random paragraphs throughout.
Rice with Chest-Nuts chapter 1 . 8/21/2019
hmm.. gotta admit this kinda scenario interest me, but will this continue though? i mean, it's like years the last time it uploaded
Rebmul chapter 1 . 1/28/2019
well this seemed interesting but I'm not gonna bother reading it till its updated again with a last updated date from 6 years ago so I put it on follow
CaptBurrito chapter 13 . 12/14/2018
Alabaster arc was pretty rushed. Where was the bomb? The fights were pretty quick, granted they are much stronger than their Canon counterparts. How were they saved from their cage (it was alluded to but not directly shown). When did the scene change to the first Crocodile fight?
CaptBurrito chapter 11 . 12/14/2018
Great move with the injury being the instigator to befriending Chopper. Also good backstory for Franky. Short and simple.
CaptBurrito chapter 10 . 12/14/2018
*deep breathe* this is a FF *deep breathe* his pirate crew are all Marines now *deep breathe*
CaptBurrito chapter 9 . 12/14/2018
Huzzah. Promotions all around. Though it's probably a move to keep Luffy Marine-centered. The more people that Luffy cares for that are with the Marines, the harder it is for him to leave.
CaptBurrito chapter 8 . 12/14/2018
She llliiiiivveesss!

What's Ace doing with Dragon?

Love the training portion, good add to the story. Shows how much he cares for his nakama. Glad to see Nami and Usopp patient enough to finish the training. Guess it's cause they are Marines and not Pirates. More prone to follow orders outside of danger.
CaptBurrito chapter 7 . 12/14/2018
Yes, finally someone does a competent Usopp. That dude is a gem of a sniper: cowardly but courageous, creative, surgical precision. Just teach him how to run and hide/defend while sniping. And he could a monster of a crew-mate.
CaptBurrito chapter 7 . 12/14/2018
Wow, advanced Rokushiki. Tekkai while moving/attacking. impressive. Haven't seen any mention of observation or Armament haki though.
CaptBurrito chapter 4 . 12/14/2018
I stand corrected. Luffy does know haki just didn't want to hit a woman.
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