Aww now I feel all warm and fuzzy

Mikoto is so sweet! And so is young Sasuke :) I just loved this one-shot!

This was incredibly sweet. I was grinning from ear to ear from start to finish, even if it did become quite the bittersweet experience.

I would like to point out that you have left out several key words and phrases throughout the story that I had to stop and autocorrect in my head (such as in the final line 'nor would the quiet love'), so please do consider editing this when you have the time. It became a bit of a distraction, and it took away from the overall impact of the oneshot as a whole.

Never the less, I loved this to bits, and it deserves a slot on my favourites.

Thank you for sharing this.

Kindest regards,

Rin

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww I love this story so much xD

Nightfury101

I have always wondered...if Mikoto wanted to adopt Naruto...

Nice story, will there be a second chapter?