THIS IS BEAUTIFUL

That was really adorable!

I love it! Congrats on a great story. I ship them so hard and you wrote them really well. The ending was so sweet. Wonderful job

me gusto

This was a really great finale. I liked the bit about Maleficent being "a force of nature." I think that's something fanfiction writers often forget - she isn't human.

I'm very glad you finished this. You did great! Good luck in your future writing endeavors.

Ooh please continue

It seems that you have forgotten this story. I really like it. I haven't read anything else like it on here. I wish you would finish it. It's should a great story and concept! I love it. Good luck. And Godspeed.

I do hope you will update this soon, I really like it. And I think there's nothing wrong with how your chapters end, by the way.

Poor Maleficent! I always thought the scene with Aurora getting angry at Maleficent as the most heart breaking.

Oh! Can't wait to see what happens in the castle. You have done a great work so far, please continue

"'It's closer than you might think,' she responded with one eyebrow arched. 'Both are signs of your impending doom.' Maleficent smiled broadly, and Diaval flinched." LOL, impending doom...

Great chapter! :)

Keep updating i love it

this story is amazing

"'Of course I am. This sandwich is actually rather tasty, and food always puts me in a good mood.'" *scoffs* What is it with boys and food?

"'Mistress... Avenge... Me...'" xD too great.

Awesome chapter!

I love MALEFICENT/DIAVAL pairing
& hope you continue. This is a wonderful start & I look forward to more. Can't get enough of them.