Reviews for The Royal Family
23027 chapter 17 . 9/15/2018
Ok. This is the best chapter in the whole story; in my opinion. Lol on the part, No one touches my hair except me." Then with the moments with snow was also awesome. I think what made it crazy was the chase scenes. Either way, it was funny, cool and downright amusing.
LockAndKey989 chapter 30 . 3/13/2018
I like this, though I would have liked Elsa being the only one small better
Sarah chapter 17 . 1/17/2016
She should have had he hair cut shorter, like a cute bob or a pixie but you would have to describe it well
ColdsWood3154 chapter 20 . 11/10/2015
Being immortal can be debatable. I mean...it depends in your situation. Being fucked up (all of your descendants and relatives got killed), or being lucky (your relatives are still alive).

Depends on your behavior, and perception of life. You get the point.

P.S.
If you're still here, you may notice that I didn't review the other chapters. It is either: the chapter is perfect (well, mostly), I got lazy, scared, or broken down, or any other stuff that might cause it.

Well...that's for me then.
ColdsWood3154 chapter 17 . 11/9/2015
The only problem here is hair grows 6 inches per year in real life. But it depends in your genetics and your hair. So maybe elsa's powers has to do something with the growth rate of her hair.
ColdsWood3154 chapter 16 . 11/9/2015
Why not make the romantic elsa x reader a 6-part one-shot or something? Or should I even call it a one-shot. So this's like a prompt for me...yeah...more like a prompt for me.

There's a couple things that I noticed in this chapter: If elsa's eight in this chapter, her height must be like a half of the reader...like in the movie. Because it said that elsa is holding the reader's waist...the scene at the basement I think. And the other is just watch your spelling.

So...actually I read like almost all of your stories like 6 months ago. I just didn't have an account back. I kinda miss you right now.

Just reliving those moments buddy.

I just wanted you back here...making stories...making us laugh like hell. No one can be ever like you...as an author.

I hope you can come back...
ColdsWood3154 chapter 8 . 11/7/2015
Another fun fact:
The storms' predicted path back then is, if I'm not mistaken, is off by up to several hundred kilometres. Pretty intense right?
This caused misleading facts, unaware people, and that caused lives.
But not to this day because path predictions have been more accurate by up to several kilometres only. Thanks to weather satellites, specially designed aircrafts, and supercomputers.
Pleading reader chapter 37 . 8/11/2015
Please finish the unforgettable Christmas series, it was that good!
Reader aka Marin chapter 20 . 8/2/2015
way too emotional, how touching, I WAS BROUGHT TO TEARS!
Whyhow chapter 9 . 7/11/2015
I can imagine Anna getting jealous if that happened to Elsa, but it wouldn't be as extreme as you showed (after all, she managed for 10 years with just her parents and 3 more on her own, so even without the other people she should be able to find something to do and should be used to missing Elsa by now), and her first reaction might be "cool," but I suspect that her second would be closer to "who are you and what have you done with my sister" than " but what about me."
Whyhow chapter 8 . 7/11/2015
I don't know that much about meteorology, but the parts that I know seemed about right. I think it was somewhat anachronistic, though, since I am not sure that people knew that much about hurricanes at the time.
Whyhow chapter 5 . 7/11/2015
I like your characterizations for Agdar and Idun, but it would be nice to see some traits that Elsa got from her father, for example, since each parent seems to correspond mainly to one child.
Whyhow chapter 4 . 7/11/2015
This chapter was much better than the previous one in terms of spelling and such. The only problem I noticed was capitalization.
Sorry I keep talking about the spelling and grammar, I'll say something about the actual story later.
Whyhow chapter 3 . 7/11/2015
You might want to check the spelling in this chapter by hand. There are a number of places where there is a real word written, but not the one you meant.
Whyhow chapter 1 . 7/11/2015
I'm trying to understand what happened... Elsa was crowned and the movie proceeded normally (I think, since Elsa and Anna are acting like sisters), and then the King and Queen came back? But then why is Elsa the Queen and her father is apparently the Prime minister? Is there some law or something that says that once a monarch is crowned they have to stay in charge, or were the parents just declared dead or something?
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