Reviews for Inspected By No 13
satoukazumasama chapter 3 . 7/24
Nice story
zelva713 chapter 3 . 7/20
This is absolutely one of the best HP fanfictions I have ever read
bigwoof chapter 3 . 7/18
Fantastic story! Thank you!
Gwen1997 chapter 1 . 7/8
love the story..i haven't laughed like this in a long time
RSegovia chapter 1 . 7/7
To correct my previous review, the series I mentioned is actually called The Keys of the Kingdom, and Mister Monday is the first book. Another similarity is how the main character, originally an ordinary boy, gets authority in the hidden magical world by having certain keys. It would definitely appeal to fans of this story!
RSegovia chapter 3 . 7/7
This story is so delightfully absurd, reminding me somehow of the Mister Monday series by Garth Nix in that paperwork and inspections rule everything. The idea of Voldemort being condemned as a faulty necromantic abomination especially tickles my fancy. It would be interesting to see a story where Harry gives an interview after the graveyard describing the weird undead and inhuman creature that Peter Pettigrew created. "Of course it's not Voldemort, Minister. Voldemort was human, and that thing is not. But Pettigrew's Monster is out there and up to no good."
era-romance chapter 3 . 7/7
this fic is always good for a laugh
maipigen chapter 3 . 6/28
This was wonderful and I wish there was heaps more!
Guest chapter 3 . 6/25
THIS IS AMAZING!

YOU ARE AMAZING!

I LOVE YOU!
thehufflepuffgirl chapter 3 . 6/25
OMG I loved it. Thank you so much for this fic :D I know that you classified it as a complete fic, but have you ever thought about continuing it? I would love to see how Umbridge would deal with Inspector Harry...
Tata chapter 3 . 6/11
This is fun. As a fellow bureaucrat I can relate much with this, with mountains of paperwork and legal aspects of our daily life, troublesome!
Bobs-Me-Uncle chapter 3 . 6/10
Absolutely hysterical fic! Sad to see it over with.
Polydicta chapter 3 . 6/10
... and I *STILL* say that full contact tiddly winks would have been fun - just think of the fines from THAT inspection.

I'm glad you didn't go for the other suggestion of nude leapfrog and formation drinking. Maybe the DEs could do that next year.
cos2bh chapter 3 . 6/6
I so wished there would be more chapters of this fantastic fic.. Please, please try to continue it..
AthenaHermione chapter 3 . 5/30
Great story !
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