Don't worry about your grammar for this one, I didn't even notice because it was beautiful in a sad way.

I really want to know what your ideas behind the King talking to wings, and how wings would be removed would be, it sounds like an interesting idea.

This was very well written, and I like the concept very much. I agree with this whole thing, especially the last few paragraphs. Wasn't her fate so sad?

Your English is excellent! It's nice that someone wrote a story about the queen, since there aren't really that many fanfictions about her.

This is great! Especially love how she has no name. After the movie I had to look online her the name Lelia and I am pretty sure that it wasn't uttered once in the movie. Though with her death coming I wonder if she left two letters. One for her baby and one for who saved her. And will a servant show Aurora a room with gifts her mom bought, made, or commissioned for her? Please write another story.

Touching and thoughtful, though short. Very interesting introspective fic! :) thanks for writing!

This is beautiful, and so sad! I really loved how you described the Queen, and it is so true! She really isn't shown to be valued beyond having Aurora, and no doubt she was only married to Stefan for convenience. The ending I loved, and overall you did a lovely job with this!

You wrote beautifully. The character of the queen was the best I.'ve read so far. Neither in the original version or the movie, was there a lot of action from the queen. I'm glad now there's something that explains her character more in depth. Continue writing!

Great job capturing the queen's side of things! Not using her name was a great decision.