It's a good story so far, and I hope you continue, but you need a beta. Two major characters' names are misspelt in this chapter alone. You're also confusing words that sound similar, such as "piece" and "peace" or "through" and "threw". A little extra time to fix these will make it much easier to read.

That aside, it's pretty good so far.

awesome i was locking for a new chapter for some time now thank you and keep updating please

Are we ever going to see Konoha's reaction to him being driven out because of their actions? It's like the only reason to keep reading this story and you've drawn it out for more than a dozen chapters.

Please don't make Naruto mentally retarded.

finally after almost a year.
pretty good chapter.
ask what the faye wanted told about that lady.
so naruto and kiva could enter chunin exam? probably with haku.
but some shinobi of konoha will probably recognize him. Since he enter to obtain fame and customers, he can't use alias (whatever he forgotten most of his childhood).
The end was interesting too, naruto and his famous talk no jutsu.
hope naruto will meet kurama soon, and use real direct magic power (like the magic counterpart of ninjutsu) and mixing ninjutsu and other chakra art with his magic.

Fun stuff just not a fan of the alternating timelines

good chap

sad chapter.
hope naruto will grow stronger and meet kyuubi

great chapter, update soon.

the traps were interesting and powerful.
But the little magic skills naruto has, are not really useful for fighter, they take too much time and focus to cast; he barely put a scratch on zabuza when kiva managed to injure him (and he was not even her opponent and she had haku to fight at same time) and his spell failed because interrupted.

I really want naruto show strong offensive (and destructive) magic skills that need only few secondes to cast (like a withkiv her violin, her spells are almost instant). until now he didn't show really interesting magic skills, only trap and weapon that most shinobi can use.

Great chapter, update soon.

fuck, Tsunami's dead, should have seen it coming seeming no one was back at the house to protect her and Inari.

Keep up the epic work, looking forward to future chapters, although you've got me wondering when Kurama/Kyubi will come into play.

This story is very well written, and I'm enjoying it greatly.

Half a chapter. To wrap up wave chapter. Then I want to see something new as missions go

haven't explained enough to actually be interesting...no mater how well written it is!