I freaking love this story so far. It is wholesome friendships like the one between Frank and Hayden that remind me not only what it is to be Christian, but what it is to be human in general.
God bless you and your creativity, man.

Dude, holy shit that sucks. I'd be mortified if that happened to me if google drive decided not to be a thing suddenly, but yeah no, seriously. Understand the pain, granted nothing broke off one of my drives but I had a bunch of games and things on it, and it decided it didn't exist to my computer anymore.

Anyways, hope you have a good new year's and hope this new year goes out being better for everyone around.

This story is legit so white, its like watching two rednecks go about it with their chicks. Seriously ruins the Pokemon atmosphere man.

a hymen is NOT like a strip of tape you run through, but a balloon arch you go under, if you are careful, you don't break it.

(source: collegehumor)

There is already so much dad humor in this and I love it.

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one of the dumbest ways to cause drama. good job.

it's like reading the lives of two 'bros'. it's very entertaining.

Lol, this chapter killed the story for me. Bye bye.

Ahem.
I'd like to point out the fact that Shelgons normally weigh around 110 Kg. I don't know how that translates in pounds, but I know that it is way more than what any person could normally carry on their shoulder.
That aside, you have done quite a nice job. Just pointing out that little fuck-physics moment right there.

a great end to a great story I await your future stories

Well, this should be interesting to read. I'll have to show this to L, she might enjoy it too.

J

It's been a while, congrats on becoming a dad! I look forward to whatever new stories you write. I don't think I've read a story with an author so persistent. 3 years; a lot of writers tend to drop their stories (though I don't really blame, if I can't finish a story in a few days more often that not I drop it too), but it's inspiring to me that amidst all this time and life that you continued. I know whatever else you write will be wonderful.

Will you continue writing this story? I've noticed you haven't updated in quite a long time. I've really enjoyed this story so far even considering it one of the best Pokemon fanfics I've read and I hope to see more of this amazing story.

Well, found this story yesterday, and Holy hell am I enjoying it!
Okay, so, the grammar may not be the best, but I have the same problem with it, so I'll just leave it as it is.
The story is good, I'll give you that. I enjoyed it a lot!
One thing that I think I missed though is the lack of description of the cracters' appearence. Have I missed it or is it just lacking? If it's there, then please navigate me to it. If it's not, I think it'll be a good idea to add it. You know, so that people can have a clearer picture in mind,
Also, please update soon! I'd like to read some more from you!

Love this story man! Any idea when the next chapter is coming out?