God, everyone is so fucking incompetent.

Oh my god, already hate Else. Wahh, can't kill. Angst. Stupid.

Seriously, she is able to do this with the sacrifice of her friends and allies. Every time she doesn't kill, she is selfishly putting her own "morals" before the lives of her friends. I hate this kind of character, and honestly, they deserve to die. I don't want to read about this kind of stupid angst.

Also, did she forget she can freeze people or something?

Also, for someone who had to deal with assassination attempts, she seems pretty unskilled at dealing with 1 person.

Lol what? This is ridiculous. She had to face off assassination attempts, and shot arrows at people, but this is her first kill? And this traumatizes her so much?

Please don't put in ridiculous angst. She killed someone who was gonna maim her and rape her. (Also, lol, rapey guys, traditional villain for the unimaginative.) The PTSD is retarded and out of place.

Please make another chapter. I'm dying to find out what happens.

FOR THE FIRST TIME IN FOORRREVVERRRR

"a coconut! are you mad? a seven ounce bird cannot carry a one pound coconut."

this just made my day ;

I'm in love with this story so far! I've read multiple crossovers with lord of the rings and this became my new favorite crossover! just seeing a brand new side to both Anna and Elsa takes the cake! Keep it up!

Get rid of the AN in chapter 6. Work on your grammar and spelling. Also, consider a beta.

this is great... cant wait for more

very good chapter when the next update

Please update this soon...

So you finally come back
A longgggg wait

Great story!