Hey! This is a great story man. I really hope you can finish it! Keep up the good work!

Ugh, Wolf dead...? Srsly? That would really suck... ."

honesty I forgot about this

Glad to see an update and looking forward to more!

... aaahhh fuck, the cliffhanger. *grumbles*
Good story so far, am enjoying this. Just hope you haven't led us all towards the big meeting with Wolf, only to kill him off in a few sentences. That would seriously suck.

It was one of those days where im done playing csgo after 18 hours and feeling like shit. I check my mail and guess what!? An update for one of my favorite fan fics! (Tadadaaa!) First, its sad to hear some bad shit happened in your personal life so i understand for the lack of update. For the story tho, please (plz) keep up the good work! I have noticed you have definitely improved alot upon your writing since "My Life is Your's".
This was a pretty good chapter, nothing too too special but at the same time nothing really bad with it. Can't wait for the next chapter to continue off after the weird ending with Wolf. Keep up the good work!
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Good chapter.

I'm sorry about the hard times that have hit you, whatever they may be. I know what it's like to go though hard times, and sadly the only advice I can offer is keep going and eventually it will get better.

That being said, I also want to say don't rush the story. It would be better to have a few months gap between updates and then return with a really good chapter than for you to finish the story when you don't feel inspired to write it, and have it come out sub-par. Some of the best stories I've read on this site sometimes go months between updates because of life.

Anyway, hope things start looking up for you soon, great chapter, and I can't wait for more. (though if I have to, I will)

All I can say is welcome back my friend. I'm so happy Fox and
Krystal are back together. I absolutely love this story, I think
of the Star Fox Team as one big family and that's what your
giving us. Keep up the good work. ;D

*shakes fist* Watch out Fox! It could be a trap! Nice chapter Write On! (Love the little couch moment there, adorable!)

awesome chapter if ya want some oc's to help with the revoloution you can borrow mine if need be

Hay here's a good idea. It will be cool if one of the man that worked with Walter was Slippy you know with him knowing his Dad and all. By the way the story is getting pretty good if you need some free time I understand. A slow story that good better then quick story that's bad you know. ,:D

I have the strangest feeling that this story will result in Fox dying in some way. After all that's happened, as broken as he looks, I can see him adapting a "I have nothing to lose" attitude. He'll have a death wish, and probably be willing to throw himself at any plan that involves saving as much people as he can, while losing his life in the process.

I also hope he can be reconciled with Krystal. Fox REALLY needs some support.

So far so good. I really won't to see what's up with Slippy. I am a Slippy fan and a won't to see if Fox father James is liveing. Keep up the good work I will be reading. ;D

I'm enjoying this story so far. I hope you up date soon I won't to see if they will find Slippy or even better James. Well I will be looking foreword to another chapter. ;D

Once again, you do not disappoint! Great Job!