I've been enjoying these shorts/drabbles. With this one, I can see that Vulcan eyebrow rising on the last comment. Keep them coming, please.

I love the last bit! YOu can almost hear the internal eye roll... 'Humans. How illogical'
Very well done for keeping with his tone

Oh poor Harry. I really feel for him here.

AWWWWWWWW
This was one of the first episodes where we see that spark between them, and I'm glad that we can see how he feels. He was making himself very vulnerable to her, and she responded in such a positive way.

Although, it did sound like a contradiction, because didn't he say he'd shown B'Elanna how to contact their spirit guide, but had tried to kill it? wouldn't that require the medicine bundle? But then even he says no-one had seen it... I'm rambling now, apologies

This one really couldn't have been anyone else but Neelix, and it fits well at the end of the episode conveying his relief.

Ooh, I like the conflict here that's going on in her head. I can almost hear it in her voice too. Great!

good introspection

I had a feeling this one would be B'Elanna... I like the almost underlying vulnerability to it, something that exterior wouldn't have shown. Very nice :)

I like the sound of this, could be very interesting indeed... I look forward to reading them :)