Reviews for The Gathering Storm
Guest chapter 10 . 11/23/2017
Great story!
cebxtra chapter 1 . 6/9/2017
"I build boats, you'd think I'd know more about keeping them afloat". YOU, my dear, are a GENIUS. I'm already so hooked on this story, I'll probably finish it all at once! I had favorited you as an author after one of your SPN stories, but now I'm gonna read all of them! Officially your fan. Keep it up, your writing is amazing!
SanBaerli chapter 10 . 2/9/2016
This story has kept me well entertained and on the edge of my seat for the past couple of days! The detail in your descriptions, thoughts and feelings is excellent, it truly makes this story come to life! Absolutely loved it. It's a bummer I only now found it, but that's probably because I've been hanging out in the Musketeer fandom more than in the NCIS fandom. lol. Thanks for sharing :D
weemcg33 chapter 10 . 10/24/2015
Wow! This story pulled me in from the very first chapter and I just had to read all 10 in the one go. So well written, totally in character and finally - it was awesome!
bellatrix83738 chapter 4 . 2/2/2015
I love your stories! I am all about Tony whump and I love the Gibbs\Dinozzo bond, plus you actually portray the characters accurately. That in itself is pretty amazing, its very hard to find good stories that are in cannon. Worst Case Scenario is by far one of my favorites, I like the fact that while it is Tony\Gibbs centric, it is still very much a team fic. Please keep writing these stories.
Tacpebs chapter 10 . 12/19/2014
I enjoyed reading this story.
Frakking Toasters chapter 10 . 11/9/2014
This was epic. I was on the edge of my seat all the way through, and I absolutely loved it. I especially loved the Tony/Gibbs dynamic. Excellent. Thank you. xo
cindythechef chapter 10 . 11/8/2014
That was exceptional. Well done :)
Dragonflysoul chapter 10 . 10/15/2014
Well done :)
Guest chapter 10 . 8/30/2014
Loved it!
Guest chapter 10 . 8/9/2014
Usually I'm not one for multiple pov fics let alone first person but this works brilliantly. I especially like how you overlapped the time each view covered and didn't just repeat the same event from each view. I think that, along with the great understanding of character, really made this story work - not to mention the plot and being well written. Thank you for writing! :)
georgiehhs chapter 10 . 7/20/2014
Ok, my bad for not leaving a final comment earlier. I loved this story! I must admit I was taken aback by the chapter from the HR lady's POV, but it worked so well seeing the team from a POV outside of the team. Again, this was awesome! Thank you for sharing.
Guest chapter 10 . 7/19/2014
Great story!
Padria95 chapter 10 . 7/13/2014
Loved this! I especially liked the previous chapter, the one from Mona's point of view, because it was really interesting to get an outside perspective on the team and the individuals! Gotta love a good Tony whump story, and this one is beyond good! Thank you thank you for writing this! It was fantastic!
tonysmel chapter 10 . 7/9/2014
Seeing the team, and the action play out, through Mona's eyes in the previous chapter was great. Everyone's lives had changed so much, but one thing that didn't change was how close team Gibbs were, and even this stranger picked up on this pretty quickly.
The reaction of Mona, and the team, to Gibbs face , with all the anguish and despair, as he looked at Tony...my poor heart.
And then when the rescue team got Tony's heart back in sinus rhythm, the relief...
This thought from Mona was my favorite line in the fic:
"And time starts moving forward again like it forgot what it was made for for a second and abandoned it's forward motion to stop and see if Tony DiNozzo lived or died." Gah.
So powerful. I've been in that moment many times, that pause that seems to last a lifetime, everyone holding their breath, waiting to see if a patient responds, lives or dies.
You captured that spot on. I think that's also probably how your readers felt, waiting to see what Tony's fate was.
Loved getting Tony's POV, alive and awake. The Auntie Em response was so Tony, ha!
"Anthony DiNozzo does not die today." Yeah, that needs to be an official rule, because Tony always follows Gibbs' rules (except for not apologizing, but that's just Tony).
Perfect ending, heavy with the sadness that had wrapped around the tragedy, but Tony and Gibbs together and alive, each with a hopeful smile.
This was wonderful. Emotionally exhausting, but wonderful! Thank you so much for another insightful, emotional adventure with my favorite team and characters. I hope your muse brings you back to this universe again. And again. Not to be greedy or anything. Have a great summer!
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