Reviews for Inquisitor Carrow and the Tournament of Tribulations
sondrex76 chapter 10 . 7/21
Another awesome instalment :)

The dark lord being forced to play a baby...hahahahaha XD
The pencil-wand of the emperor is hilarious, he is so overpowered :)
"secretary of the personal secretary of the Senior Undersecretary"...hahahaha XD
I love how we get to see crutch's lack of knowledge on current affairs :)
I imagine something that could have happened were when Harry gets called, crow will teleport in and immediately figure out that Moody is a fake...nope not at all
Book on how best to deal with zombies...Carrow will be so pleased when he finds out.
The image of the God Emperor unable to move as he floats in the middle of the air...
...the emperor really should just ask Carrow to give him some money(...then again, he would probably take that as an imperative and start giving him all of the money, by force)
I...Carrow is slowly growing to understand science and such...he is getting...enlightened? This does really show the superhuman qualities of a space marine's intelligence...assuming it is a high level of schooling he is testing for
So were Carrow's signature so filled with intent of specifically what it could be used to that it refused to be used for anything else?
aww, Luna and Natasha, they would make great friends
I like how Albus and Carrow both report to the emperor, even though the emperor himself really doesn't seem overly interested :)
The board's reactions to hearing that they had revolutionary fusion technology hand-delivered by some random friend of Carrow's...its fusion, not fission, they really should have seen the difference (I say, sarcastically)
"young Allesandor ", well Dumbledore you really should try to remember that he is actually older than you.
Ron's reaction to touching the letter...I wonder if he will join the imperial cult, I mean, the emperor does inspire people quite powerfully
Water as fuel for fusion, wouldn't that be inefficient since you would have to split the hydrogen from the oxygen? Then again, it also would not be explosive until it is being used.
I love how Timothy doesn't get how he probably looks like a hired killer or something like it.
I love that cat
I wonder if they will make a philosopher's stone to allow life extension, or maybe something based on it
...Bernard was very close to becoming vampire food, wasn't he? Why do I find vampires adorable? If vampires were real I bet it would take way too little effort for one of them into tricking me into a situation where they could kill me. Something to work on I suppose.
Bernard is having a rather fascinating day.
The peace lovers slowly growing more militaristic is hilarious.
I am almost surprised Carrow didn't take on his armor before going against Voldemort.
...doest he emperor secretly enjoy the unpredictability Carrow leads to?
I wonder if the wizarding world in this originally were destroyed by some cultist causing them to be exterminated by calling upon things best left unmentioned, maybe this "she" for example.
Carrow's reaction to meeting the God Emperor...just, beautiful :)

I found a few potnetial minor misspellings and such:
1
" what would would they have, do" - " what would they have, do"
" Timothy had place an advert for" - " Timothy had placed an advert for"
2
"believing was he was hearing. " - "believing what he was hearing. "
" were made sterner stuff." - " were made of sterner stuff."
" so no would " - " so nobody "
3
"A door creaked open," - "A door creaked opened,"
"mum for suggestion" - "mum for suggestions" or "mum for a suggestion"
"the reception the announcement of" - "the reception of the announcement of"
" was aware Carrow currently involved in. " - " was aware Carrow was currently involved in. "
" under...less that" - " under...less than"
4
"just checking Su Li is alright, yo" - "just checking if Su Li is alright, yo"
5
"Now I have your attention" - "Now that I have your attention"
" , " - ", "
"absolute worse, Hermion" - "absolute worst, Hermion"
"has someone being feeding" - "has someone been feeding"
6
"obvious why he transporting Artemis" - "obvious why he was transporting Artemis"
", as official Ministry " - ", as an official Ministry " or ", as the official Ministry "
" him stew in own juice for " - " him stew in his own juice for "
"The pain was incredibly, " - "The pain was incredible, "
"from such as Black, but" - "from one such as Black, but"
7
" stared in disbelieve, was sh" - " stared in disbelief, was sh"
"smart in black and gold braid (" - "smart in a black and gold braid ("
"and that was also Gringotts' verdict " - "and that Gringotts' verdict "
"key already to go," could be "key all ready to go,"
" , " - ", "
"to really hope the sorry pair," - "to really help the sorry pair,"
"seen it's like anyw" - "seen its like anyw"
8
" let loose he huge sigh " - " let loose a huge sigh "
"close as I thought could. " - "close as I thought I could. "
" for it was worth, and o" - " for all it was worth, and o"
9
" pleased the gardeners no end." - " pleased the gardeners to no end."
"violence to fast for" - "violence too fast for"
"glare at his as he " - "glare at him as he "
10
"company's being doing" - "company's been doing"

Thanks for writing and have an awesome day!
NianPoletech chapter 1 . 6/28
Jaja, que mierda mas buena
Umbra Erebus chapter 1 . 5/14
Fuk that shit with the bby volemort was funny
Zombie Boy chapter 2 . 4/17
Awesome chapter, as always. One little detail though:

The scene with Hermione and her pistol, where she was loading it. It's a magazine, not a clip. Both hold ammunition, but clips are what you use to load ammunition into a magazine.
Lunar Cleric chapter 1 . 4/16
That's nothing, you should have seen the amount of research I had to put into my Star Wars/Titanfall crossover. Not to mention my Fallout/Wars in the Middle East crossover.
fazilbeyadob chapter 1 . 3/2
hi
RonRR chapter 2 . 1/24
The image of Hermione with a mini-gun, shorter hair with a longer coloured braid in front of her right ear strongly reminded me of Coco from the american anime RWBY. Have you seen it?

Here is a good image of what Coco looks like, hopefully with the address written so that fanfiction dot net won't blow up on it.

https colon slash slash vignette dot nocookie dot net / dbxfanon / images / 4 / 42 / Coco_ / revision/latest?cb20170313173908

Thank you for writing,

Ron
Guest chapter 2 . 1/13
James pulled a Vader, before Vader even existed
Tork01 chapter 11 . 1/2
I'm confused here. Happy New Year anyway!
Shadow Sword chapter 11 . 1/2
I thought that too.
Seems a bit redundant to me but what the hell do I know, I've only been waiting for 3 months.
Maybe littlewhitecat just needs a refresher.
When last we left off, Carrow got it in his head to show the Order of the Phoenix just how ass backwards they are, and it's working.
Thanks for letting us know your alive.
Wargamer08 chapter 11 . 1/2
What's going on with this latest chapter? It seems odd to having something to direct people to a sequel, months after the sequel came out.
TheWateringWizard chapter 10 . 8/24/2019
Hahaha I really love the DC so much ! I wished he had picked Hermione to receive Astartes augments ! He might still in the future...
TheWateringWizard chapter 9 . 8/24/2019
Will Timothy get a mechanical eye ?! That would be awesome !
TheWateringWizard chapter 8 . 8/24/2019
Man that chapter was hilarious once again !
1 love m4gic chapter 7 . 8/20/2019
I find it quite stupid he did not just apply a notice me not charm on the ship and be done with any and all kind of trouble... Well, he is Carrow, so i guess its alright, but it is one thing being from somewere else(or other time), so if he is NOT stupid he shouldbe able to behave...it is the same with the rules society abides by... there are people who cant comprehend some of them and find them unneccesary, but they will still abide them... Carrow being this dense, and this far, is starting to get on my nerves a little! Other than this, everything is gold and interesting! Cant wait to read more, and for Carrow and The God Emperor to meet! And Carrow needs a woman who can grab him by the balls ASAP!
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