Wow! Just wow. I absolutely love this chapter, I think it's my favourite so far. I know I'm late to the party in discovering this hidden gem of a story but I'm so glad I have stumbled upon it now. This chapter is so beautifully poetic. The visual picture this painted for me was incredible and I just really like the beauty in such a brutal ending of the relationship between Cora and Regina. It was tumultuous and vicious but at the same time, peaceful for Regina in the end. Thank you for writing and sharing this

I really like it !

Hi, me again just forgot to mention that if you need guidance as to how a story is properly written and awfully addicting, you can check out Red by Isah Underhill; amazing outlaw fanfiction, or Turncoat by Elizaye; beautifully written dramnione fanfiction.

While you main idea seemed like a valid one, it is so very inconsistent. It is noticible right on the first chapter as well as all of your grammar mistakes. I often try to be optimistic and due to the fact that there are very dissapointlty few outlaw fanfictions, I gave your story a try. But I got to say it can't be done: there are way too many grammatical mistakes, no character development nor conssistensy, not to mention there is no flow; you jump from one point to the other. Its just awful. So much in fact that my love for this couple was not enough to read your story. I do so hope that if you wish to keep writing fanfiction that you go back and correct your old ones, as practice if you will.

Beautiful story. I couldn't put it down!

Awww. So sad to see the story ending, I feel like it could have elicited a few chapters in between each more elaborately, but nevertheless, I loved the stories told. Phenomenal.

I have read it twice. It is absolutely beautiful. Don't know if you will read this but this is so great I had to compliment it. You wrote those a long time ago. I will probably read it again. Very engaging & a wonderful read. Love it. Thanks for writing it.

this story is just beautiful! thank you so much for it (to be an inspiration for me to write an OQ fiction these day, because that's all what we have know ugly crying, and for writing Robin in such beautiful way that my expectations in men are even higher now;)

Wow. Awesome chapter!

just re-read for likr, the fifth time. I still love this sort so much!

Awesome story. Well done.

Am still in the middle of reading this chapter but is so good that I can not put my phone down and have been in it for an hour.

I just found this story a few days ago and I absolutely loved it! Fantastic job!

the last bit, so cute

Wonderful story! I loved it. You are a great writer