excellent story you've created. always makes me upset because I'm Edward and bella all the way. so my natural instinct is to be nope no nope lol. I hope Orlay will soothe the ache this left.

I'm happy Bella didn't choose Edward. She never deserved him anyway.

I don't like this Bella if she wanted to kiss someone else beside his boyfriend than she should just leave Edward. IDC how sexually frustrated she was, cheating is cheating. I feel bad for Edward.

Also there's nothing romantic about heroines getting sexually aroused by someone other than the heroes.

yeah that considered cheating. Bella is kinda pathetic.

Ew

2nd reading or possibly 3rd but such a good story, thanks for sharing

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DAMN!

Ok I was loving this story! But it’s not going to get all weird, is it? Because I was really starting to get addicted to this story!

What a fabulous story. How on earth did you invent this?
I am an Edward and Bella HEA reader. Surprised I stuck with this but so rewarding. Of course when the eventual final split came I was crying crying crying inconsolable.
Thank you.

Absolutely bloody loved it, loved the idea of Arthur De Montfort. Thank you for an enjoyable couple of days reading this xx Alexis

This reads so British. Maybe an American beta could help with the tone and word choice?

IM DONE I’ve tried so hard. Waited for you to hopeful describe ONE character. You didn’t. And I’m not attached so I can’t read. Best of luck I hope you got better at describing OC’s

Yet again introducing a new character without describing how this person looks. Honestly it’s like you expect us to already know these people but they are yours! It’s so frustrating because I cannot connect and become attached to any of your original characters because you refuse to describe them

I’m having a very difficult time reading this because you haven’t described ANY OF YOUR ORIGINAL CHARACTERS