Hi! I loved the twist in the story, and at any momento I imagined that those two could be married and had a child.
Thanks for this beautifull story, you are a genius as a writer.
Regards.

PS: I'm sorry for my mispellings and bad grammar, I'm not an english speaker. But I love read stories in english.

Wow!

Such a fresh take on this trope! I have read a lot (far too many) Severitus fics in my day-although I'm only assuming this will eventually be Severitus-and this one seems to be one of the few unique gems that are both compelling and well-written. Kudos!

Happy writing, and may writer's block never darken your doorstep!

- Christi

A on this! Though I do think you should clean out the review-response and author note clutter.

All in all i really like this story and i hope too see a sequel if you have written it already i would love too know the name of it :)

I love this. Read it in one sitting! I was feeling for a bottom!Snape mpreg fic, and I am so glad I found this. It was brilliant. Severus is still the same old snarky man, but he has flashes of tenderness, and I love it. I love the pensieve memories as well. It made my heart absolutely blow with happiness. James and Sev are so cute! I love how everyone is connected. Lily as the Aunt, Remus as the friend, and Sirius as the godfather. Beautiful. Everyone is IC, which makes it even more amazing. I love Sasu and Sakuna. They're so pretty sounding.

I can't wait to find out how Voldemort/Death Eaters will be handled. And what is the connection with Draco and Harry? Mmm, something is happening there.

Love it.

James ? gross -.-

I really enjoyed this and am sorry to see the sequel does not appear to have been completed.

Can't believe I have never found this fic before, and I am enjoying it. But why all the mystery re what it is about? I found it because I did a topic search.

I really enjoyed reading this story.

I like that Sasu's snarkiness matches those of Severous.

A little? You sure it's a LITTLE?

This whole story is amazing! At least what I've read so far. Love Severus as Harry's father/mother. Also, Lily as Sev's half sister... GENIUS!

Sooooo love the twist! Hurhur deffs on my fave list :)

Perfect ending to a perfect story.

I generally dislike Sirius, don't think I'd ever be able to like him, and I love that Sev's finally telling him to grow up because Harry is more important 3