Reviews for Watching the World (quietly) |
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SilviaGreyback chapter 17 . 3/16/2016 An absolutely stunning piece of writing. I love the plot line and Reyna's way of thinking. This is the could of writing i aspire to write. 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Avan chapter 17 . 1/24/2015 Awwwww mannn this is the coolest fic I've ever read! Reyna is amazing and the way you've portrayed her/writing this is awesome, please please do continue I can't wait for the next chapter! |
Writingnerd291 chapter 17 . 11/30/2014 Oh man, that was so good! I'be probably already said this, but your writing is amazing. Keep on writing, and you will go far! |
gayheroine chapter 13 . 11/25/2014 Aww, okay so the Jeyna starts. :( not the biggest fan of Jeyna, but reading the story is worth reading through it :3 |
gayheroine chapter 6 . 11/25/2014 I love Reyna's inner voice. I love how you portray her too; strong, capable and calculating as hell :D |
gayheroine chapter 5 . 11/25/2014 Oh my god it's a Reyna-centric story You have no idea how long I have been looking for this... Thaaank you so much...! |
Writingnerd291 chapter 16 . 11/2/2014 This is such a good chapter! I love it. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the amazing writing, you are doing a great job! |
auroraborealix3 chapter 13 . 10/13/2014 Jason wouldn't be on probatio, considering he would have been in the legion since he was very young (He has twelve lines on his arm in TLH). |
Writingnerd291 chapter 15 . 10/13/2014 This is a really good chapter! I really liked the ending, how Reyna thought about wanting to be praetor. Keep up the good work! |
Zvala5445 chapter 9 . 10/13/2014 I have no words... You capture emotions so beautifully, woman :) |
Writingnerd291 chapter 13 . 9/16/2014 Yay! They finally met. Will Reyna meet Dakota, Gwem, and/or Bobby? |
Guest chapter 13 . 9/15/2014 Pleaase continue with OCat |
Writingnerd291 chapter 12 . 9/6/2014 Another great chapter. Does this mean she'll reach Camp Jupiter soon? |
Writingnerd291 chapter 11 . 8/31/2014 You're a really good author, did you know that? Wel, great chapter, update soon. |
Writingnerd291 chapter 9 . 8/3/2014 That's an awesome chapter! I'm excited for the next chapter. |