Reviews for Demigod of Fairy Tail |
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Natsu chapter 12 . 6/17 Love your story so far. Would be great if you released more chapters. |
KingJGamer chapter 6 . 5/14 Also, I forgot to add this, but add more moments of Percy being a klutz. |
KingJGamer chapter 12 . 5/13 Ok, but the thing that most annoys me about this story is that Percy was found by a dragon to learn Dragon Slayer magic. It wasn't a lacrima implanted in his body, that was just such a big plot hole for me. And why not God Slayer magic, it would fit with his demi-god status. Wait, is he going to have both types of lost magic with him? I mean, Cobra was able to use both Dragon Slayer magic and Sound Magic. Otherwise, it's a good story so far, if not a little bland and confusing sometimes (Also I'm an Erza x Jellal person... but other than that, still find it enjoyable). My only question is how are you going to include the others of the Percy Jackson world? Is Percy going to travel to his original world after a harpy chases after a lead on Percy Jackson? I tip I could give you to help future arcs is to have more original villains who stand out more. I mean, I just got through with reading this whole thing and I have trouble remembering the Lighting person... that guy. If you want an idea of a good and memorable original villain, just read the fic "Fairy May Cry", both Job and Nelo Angelo were pretty memorable for their arcs. Hope you find that notebook or just make it up as you go along. Or heck, maybe you could just rewrite the future arcs in a digital notebook. |
KingJGamer chapter 4 . 5/13 Wait, how is Percy not getting motion sick? |
Matt chapter 12 . 5/8 Finally! Also is Storm a demigod also? |
Matt chapter 11 . 2/20 Update you procrastinating punk! |
D470N3B01 chapter 2 . 12/16/2018 I feel the Laxy/Peraxus |
Guest chapter 11 . 12/5/2018 Nice. Honestly would have preferred Mira but hey, what can you do. I would have liked a little more divergence from canon too but eh. Overall it ok. Not great but it’s a decent read. |
Matt chapter 11 . 8/4/2018 Finally! What took you so long? I hope we find out more about Percy's opponent in the next chapter. P.S. Please update soon. I really like this story. |
0TakaT0 chapter 11 . 8/4/2018 Really good so far. Plz update soon. Ty. Sincerely, Taka PS. Can’t wait for you to start your next fairy tail story |
Guest chapter 2 . 6/27/2018 ERZA ERZA ERZA ERZA ERZA |
Matt chapter 10 . 5/22/2018 Also I'm pretty sure that Storm is Jason what with his electric powers and how you mentioned eagles(which are affiliated with C.J.) in this chapter. |
Matt chapter 10 . 5/22/2018 Please update soon, I'm really interested in this story. |
AACM25 chapter 3 . 3/18/2018 so percy has yet to realize that he can heal with water, and get the strength of a god while in it |
Meijin Lightus chapter 10 . 3/7/2018 Great chapter m8 can't wait for more |