Reviews for Wizard Kingpin
Mopare chapter 21 . 7/7
Unless peter is not with Ron idk how Harry can look at the map and not see him especially when he check it a lot to look for the chamber of secrets
Jack Inqu chapter 27 . 7/6
Hmm, what does Harry have planned now? Still very risky, using Bellatrix like this, but hopefully he has a handle on it.

Take care, good luck, stay safe, stay healthy, and I look forward to your next update.
rebaine mira chapter 7 . 7/4
Allen Walker ... i do not Kniw if you Know but that is my favourite character from my favourite manga that is D GRAY MAN
bet7368 chapter 27 . 7/3
Going to be the last chapter I read. Can't do this even though it make believe. Enjoy till the last few chapters. Good luck
agnar chapter 11 . 7/2
heh, okay, as horrible a teacher as Snape is, he'd make an even worse Ambassador. The UK would be at war within a week if Dumbledore sent Snape off to meet with people for his ICW job.
agnar chapter 6 . 7/2
It's rather telling of just what is important to McG here, that she's more worried at the fact Harry actually knows his rights and intends to make sure they're not violated, than she is about the fact she didn't know that by-law herself to begin with.

Like, why the hell shouldn't a student know the by-laws of the private school they're attending? She seemed shocked Harry could find them and read them, as if they were meant for staff only or something.
Guest chapter 27 . 7/2
Very good story enjoyed it very much look forward to more
fire0ice chapter 8 . 7/2
If elder Potter's enclosed themselves in the manor, when, where and who did the burying? And did Harry really skip the rest of the first year and part of second when he mentioned that he was looking forward to third year in his mid-term review?
fire0ice chapter 3 . 7/2
How on earth did this child's age jump from 6 to 8?
javi30 chapter 27 . 7/1
good chapter.
Thank you for continuing to share this story.
Keep writing.
blessings and good health to you and your loved ones.
beatshield chapter 27 . 7/1
great chapter
Guest chapter 27 . 7/1
Cant wait to see what Harry does with an expanded trunk and a few elves... pot farm?
LBII chapter 27 . 7/1
Well done! To anyone thinking of reading this story, know that this is nowhere near the typical slightly "Grey/Dark Harry" tale. I read a lot of HP fan fiction and there is a freshness to this work. It is not the same old story dressed it a new set of clothes. It seems that Harry seems to do good even if it was not his intention or motivation. I highly recommend this effort.

I would like to caution this writer. At the beginning of your story you made reference to Harry learning all the businesses including the whores. You have not mentioned them since. Prostitution is the oldest profession human trafficking is in many peoples opinion is the ugliest. I would suggest you steer clear of this and stick to the older but wiser type ladies. It might even be a place that offers old guard ladies, looking for a little fun, polyjuiced as high class hookers. I just would not get too explicit. It would be fun to see Lucius accidental hire Narcissa polyjuced for an evening of passion. Thank you for sharing with us your time, talents and imagination.
Guest chapter 27 . 6/30
I really cant take seriously any adult still screaming incantations. Ever heard of silent casting? It makes for a great way to enrich your writing and expanding your imagination about what a magical fight could be instead of this crap slinging childish spells one after another
Kairan1979 chapter 27 . 6/30
Thanks for the new chapter.
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