Reviews for Vet on Call
FollowerOfFanfics007 chapter 1 . 1/9/2015
hope you update soon great chapter and story and writer.
Daryl chapter 2 . 1/3/2015
great chapter. update soon
bIoHaCk chapter 2 . 7/13/2014
Come on jemma skye totally digs u girl... Please do update much love
Alice N.P.M chapter 2 . 7/14/2014
This is quickly becoming my new favorite fic. Pleaaaaaaaase updateeeeeeeeeeee!

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Rioux chapter 1 . 7/11/2014
I am absolutely in love with this fic.
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Iza.G chapter 2 . 7/13/2014
Oh, this story is so great! It's even better to me because not only is Skimmons but because I'm studying to be a Animal Scientist. Reading a story envolving animals is always great :)
ellec77 chapter 1 . 7/6/2014
Super adorable! Very cute interactions. I look forward to the next update!
StoryGirlWrites chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
I think this is very cute. Keep it up.
GothicPheonix chapter 1 . 7/4/2014
I really enjoyed reading this. Jenna would make a good vet, I believe. And having Skye have a dog named Comet was perfect. And I love the banter between them.

Um, and I hope I'm not overstepping boundaries by pointing out a few spelling errors. I just thought your like to know. I know sometimes people look for betas too and though I actually can't be a beta due to scheduling, I try to provide most of the proofs in the comments. That way not too much work has to be done. And you didn't miss too much :) Unlike some other fanfics I have read.

Did you mean to say patient here? ("Your owner is smart," Jemma murmured as she moved to the computer on the side bench, typing in the ID code into the patent list.)

I think you meant to say 'came bursting into the room' right? (Skye can bursting into the room around fifty minutes later, just as Jemma was pinning the bones in place, she was soaked through and her hair was plastered across her face. "Oh my god,")

The extra 'they' before ' didn't ' is confusing ("I like to think they maybe they didn't know they hit him.") unless you meant to say " I'd like to think that maybe they didn't know they had hit him"

Don't forget your apostraphes when spelling words like won't, shan't, don't, etc. Otherwise it may cause the story to look run together (there are some stories that never check the spelling or grammar, have all their words in lowercase when capitalization is needed and their paragraph structures with dialogue and description is a mess; making it hard to read)
["I know. But I'm going to guess that you wont want to leave until Comet wakes up and that wont be for a few hours."]
Same here, I think you meant to say It's [It when you start answering your own questions you need to start worrying." Jemma teased, handing the clothes to Skye.]
Here instead you should probably use 'observation' instead of supervision because that is what doctors say when a patient needs to stay overnight.
("Sorry," Jemma apologized, shaking her head lightly. "We need to keep him in over night for supervision.)

Using 'dead' here doesn't quite make sense, I think you want to say 'death.' ("She was a chemist, right? That Polish lady who won two nobel prizes and died a horrible dead via radium?")

The dialogue here is really confusing, I don't understand what Skye is trying to say [Skye asked as she picked up Comet, cautiously hugging him to her chest. "I get if you want shot of me,"]

And I know you meant to say "Will he be able to walk with that cast on?" Skye asked when Jemma walked back into the reception area. ["Will he but able to walk with that cast on?" Skye asked when Jemma walked back into the reception area.]

And be careful when you spell 'patients' because four times you spelled 'patents' instead [After that she made herself concentrate on her paper work instead of staring at one of her patents.]
["We usually have a coupe of patents but because of the storm."]
["You can't pick up patents, remember?"]

And here you meant to say "Am I boring now?" right? [Jemma yawned as she nodded, about to move back behind the desk when Skye spoke up. "I'm I boring now?"]
And one common mistake and easily done is mixing up your 'their' 'there' and 'they're'. I've done it a couple of times in essays, and many people continually make this mistake. But here's a tip to help you remember to keep from making these errors easily. There' is a location or direction, and 'they're' is they are (ex: They're happy. Because saying They are sounds more 'proper' or upperclass instead if modern. Same could be said for 'you are' instead of using ' you're ' ). Here you want to use 'their' because it's a possessive. '
["It's mad how many people bring there pets in here and turn down getting them vaccinated or de-wormed or chipped."

You meant to say 'their dumb rules' right? (All of them went to some top university to be a doctor or lawyer or business dude and I work for the government. If you don't follow ther dumb rules they don't like you.")

And did you mean "We do, but the first couple of times we worked with the zoo, we worked *with* some people from other clinics and one of them was obviously new" here ["We do but the first couple of times we worked with the zoo we worked some people from other clinics and one of them was obviously new.]

And did you mean 'That bloody cat' instead of 'That's (that is) bloody cat' ?
[ "That's bloody cat. I'm telling you, it's evil, Jemma!" Fitz snapped, taking of his coat before turning to Jemma, holding his hand up to show the scratch marks that matched the ones on his face.]

Now back to the story itself. The ending was just so cute. And isn't 'Hypnos' also the name of a Pokemon? I totally agree with Skye. Thise names are genius.