I liked the fact that Aki was an angel, although I would have like a tiny bit more action. maybe fighting. I mean no offence, the story was great I loved it. And alsoare wings really the nost sensitive part on an angels boby. just wondering.

T-That's totally magnificent / but why ...why is just one shot ;-; this fiction is totally good

i like the story. please make some more stories like this.

* this was good and different. I like a sexy Akihito with wings. I wonder if he can hide or ret retract the wings into his body when in public. So many possibilities for future storlines. Maybe he gets captured again and sold in a unique underground sex trade for humans and non humans. Maybe he uses his abilities to help people.

This is an amazing story. Why did u stop?

I love it ahhhh this was awesome so many feels cause I can so see it happening why eles would everyone be falling for Ali in th first place haha thanks for writing

this is cute - sad that the demons left so early but cute either way

This story was great. I liked it.

yes, of course! LEMON! Always lemon! you can't go wrong with that! haha kidding, it is possible to go wrong with putting sex in a scene, especially if it doesn't fit into the story or merges with it as it should, unless it's supposed to be a PWP or crack, then it's all good - for the most part.

Love this! It still needed some fine tuning, grammar fixes, but all in all, enjoyable to read and left me wanting more! Please tell me there's more! :P Angel Akihito is awesome and being an archangel means he's powerful and high-ranking. Not to mention how hot, beautiful and cool Aki looks like with wings! which Yamane Ayano-sensei has already drawn- it looks amazing!

also, too much repetition with how you wrote the demons, especially in the dialogue when you added who was saying what like "the purple haired demon said," "the red haired demon" etc. Maybe names should have been given to them or used synonyms or variations of describing them.
You also had a few times when you repeated yourself/ phrased the same meaning or idea a little differently, either in the same sentence or the one after it.

Thank you for writing and sharing! :D

That was a cute story. Liked it.

Please, MOORE! XD .My imaginations are running wild as the story goes on. i was just imagining that; what if asami is actually "special" or like "have a higher status on both sides", that would be awsome . anyway, it's just my opinion.
BUT, nevertheless it's a great story and i would like you to continue. :D

Muy buen fic, espero la continuación

This was really good. The story had nice flow and didn't feel rushed. I wish you would make a lemon version though! Please!?

Love this

I like you story. I hope you can write more!