I don't know if you know but...gazel is a boy...UNLESS that was the part of the story then ok, though I kinda wish there is a bit more drama other than that I say ok for 30 days

In fact I will not press you But we are in 2017 And you have completed all your stories about Suzono and Nagmo All I read your stories I am surprised to many I can not predict what will come soon Like the rest of the stories so I encourage you It makes me excited
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Put a little long chappies :)
and that hand part was really confusing,i got that part,when the chap. finished,

pweese update FAKE LOVE TT

Nice nice! I like it really much! NO! Love it! hihi

So since you asked about your strengths and weaknesses, here they are!

Your strengths:
1.I really like the way you write, it's easy to read and easy too see! If you understand what I mean, when I read a story I see the images in my head, but I can't with all stories, but with yours it's really easy!

2. Your vocabulary is perfect, you don't use too much hard words, so it's for the almost everyone possible to read, except for the ones who can't speak/read English properly XD

3. You really stick to the characters personality, Gazelle is Gazelle and Burn is Burn, that exactly why I like them, so keep doing it ;)

4. You explain good enough what going on, precisely in the good value, you don't go over explaining but you also don't explain too little

Your flaws:

1. Have more confidents in your writing-skils, don't worry too much about it, as long as you can put your on imagination in words, there is nothing that can go wrong! ;P You are the one who has to like it after all!

2. Not a two, trust me when I say you don't really have a weakness in your writing, at least not that I see XD
I hope it helped you a bit :D

And I really hope you update soon-!

That was really cute! I'm looking forward to the rest!

hello i really like this story i can imagine this story will be perfect and thank you for your review for my story''the meaning of the life''

Good luck in updating! XD

Nice story you got there!
Can't wait for your next update :3