Reviews for Osmond's Pill Testing |
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Zinex chapter 4 . 8/12/2017 This was absolutely hilarious |
Noswald chapter 1 . 12/25/2014 Good stuff, especially osmond's wicked personality. I love max & monica fluff fic so this was a real treat. |
yellow 14 chapter 4 . 7/12/2014 Oh he's dead. Very dead;D Keep writing |
yellow 14 chapter 3 . 7/7/2014 Not good for Osmond in his future methinks. Monica and Max are likely to kill him after all.A few mis-spelt words like naughty and you use comma's to end speech. Equally the capital letters don't belong either by default, so that's another issue. (For example, at the end when Monica says "I love you too." She said, should read "I love you too," she said) Keep updating |
yellow 14 chapter 2 . 7/7/2014 One of the more interesting ones. Not nice of him to do though, but where's the fun in being nice;D? |
yellow 14 chapter 1 . 7/5/2014 Ooops;D A very funny and twisted piece. Keep writing |