I love this I want to make more

WHOO! Now this is a happy ending! And also, a little mix-up was truly a blessing in disguise. Team Rocket is cut off from their organization as they were now in the Big House of Life, and Ash is healing well. It seems things have come to a good close... and also Ash gained something much more worthwhile from Miette! Yes!

Excellent work! Keep it up!

Yes! Ash is recovering well, and it seems that his new hearing aid came in handy here. Team Rocket got distracted by the catfight drama, got caught in their own trap... and hauled away where they will see what prisoners do to those who seriously harm children.

Excellent work on everything here! Keep it up!

Now this is better. Ash got injured badly with moderate, temporary handicap afflictions but he's okay now. Miette and Serena get serious in protecting him from Team Rocket, and also resume their competition for him while healing. I have to say, this story gets interesting by the minute and in a good way!

Keep it up!

Man! Jessie here is one hardcore, nasty villainess! She has really went down in being human. James and Meowth have shred of humanity in their beings to at least treat Ash before leaving. Bonnie and Clemont deal out justice to Team Rocket and retrieve the Pokémon... but it seemed that the cost of victory may have been a price Ash has bought.

Let us see on what happens next! Keep it up!

I agree with Bonnie on this one when she talks to Ash, and also disagree with Clemont as well. Girls are living, breathing blessings from the Lord. Priceless treasures in so many ways that while some do cause some trouble... most provide a kind of unique, rare quality that brings out the best in us men. So women are never a curse; they are a real blessing.

Serena and Miette's competition got heated up for sure, but now they are working together to bring back safe and sound the young man they have come to know and love! Let us see on what happens next!

Keep it up!

Now this is cool! It seems that Ash is caught in-between two rivals for his heart, and he is very much confused. Jessie... I believe she gave him some mixed advice here. In my view, getting involved with the opposite sex doesn't go asking for trouble. It means starting on a new venture; one filled with possibilities, tension to keep the energy there, and also a strive to go the extra mile in a special way that is much more fulfilling than just adventures with friends.

As for Clemont, he needs to know that sometimes you just have to take a leap of faith. Ash will still have his friends yes, but he also has a chance at something more deeper, more potent than just friendship. Something that I believe he has been missing out on for years, and just needs to take a chance at something that could mean more for him in the long-run.

So far, so good! Keep it up!

Chapter 7

Could you possibly continue this story with a sequel because I'm confused ash and miette clearly like each other but miette is pushing Serena to confess

Does ash like me orher

Not bad kiddo

Good ending

This story was really good i hope u make a sequel to this one there aren't very many stories where ash and miette become a couple so like to see them interact with each other more and they should go on their first date together

1 Miette is not a witch she has feelings people ! She cried when Serena beat her . Poor sap . 2. Somebody should make a fanfiction when Miette beats Serena and wins a princess key in the fanfiction make her have a glacion xo Kalos

I dare somebody to make a ash x reader and the reader is the princess of sinnoh or Kalos or something ! Also that miette is treated like a actual rival and not some evil witch ! And ash is not Serena 's ! He's nobody ( but mine )