Reviews for The Legend of Naruto
Serafina Fairway chapter 10 . 6/20
Okay, not gonna lie, the Tsunade thing came from way out left field somewhere...a few hundred miles away. It doesn't really make sense. There's nothing to suggest that was going to happen, and Naruto hasn't displayed any actions to suggest he'd just go "what the hell?" and hop into something like that, not to mention that all his interactions with Rose and his other love interests would lead people to believe he'd at least have been hesitant to take that sort of action so abruptly. It just feels like it comes from nowhere.
RWIW chapter 17 . 3/25
Thanks for the update!

Sorry your life's going so badly, man. For what it's worth, your stories have given a lot of people good entertainment. That's worth something, at least.
Guest chapter 3 . 3/22
Nooo. Naruto-kun, stooop. Everyone's watching, you know we can't do that here." At this point, she began to giggle and squirm in her seat. "Ohh, you're so naughty today. I guess if you insist…"

one of the best things I've ever read.

Rose quirked a brow at this and shook her head. "I could, but we shouldn't waste our time with that. There are hundreds of people living in Konoha-Lohan and they need protection far more than the Hokage needs assistance."

should be thousands rather than hundreds. It's a really big village. Each village should have a couple thousand ninja alone minimum and if you need a good reminder of the size just YouTube any video that shows when Pain crushed the village from above.

Showing a massive overview before he unleashes the attack.
Guest chapter 2 . 3/22
Loving this story so far.
Dragon and Sword Master chapter 17 . 3/21
An enjoyable chapter and quite honestly...I liked seeing Tayuya changing for the better because of everything that's going on. Much better to have the two of them being stranded in your fic than Dart and Rose.
Guest chapter 17 . 3/20
Awesome chapter. I hated the Ghost boss fight on the Phantom ship. Bastards were a pain in the ass to beat with the revival crap they did if you didn't use magic that hit the whole group.
SPark681 chapter 17 . 3/20
Hmm, a nice chapter so Tayuya admits to loving Dart nice anyways keep up the great work!
SPark681 chapter 16 . 8/18/2019
Hmm, great chapter so Tayuya and Dart huh nice pairing though gotta wonder when Shana loses her dragoon powers wonder if Miranda will get it or will Hinata anyways keep up the great work!
darth56 chapter 16 . 8/16/2019
nice to read a new chapter to this story it was a very good read thanks
Dragon and Sword Master chapter 16 . 8/16/2019
Pretty good chapter as always and i enjoyed the boat scene even if i found it annoying in the game.
Shifter chapter 15 . 7/27/2019
Great story continue as soon as possible please
Dragon and Sword Master chapter 15 . 7/27/2019
Have to admit I'm intrigued by the little moment between Naruto and Meru here. I can also see Meru having trouble sleeping due to her hiding her true nature and worried about others hating her for it. Some reason though...I can see Rose raising a stink out of it at first because of being the Black Monster, but that's up to you.
Tera12 chapter 15 . 7/27/2019
Great chapter :D Cant wait for more
Guest chapter 14 . 6/8/2019
Great chapter as always. Also I have a suggestion for a story idea, can you make a Naruto and Yu-Gi-Oh! 5Ds crossover where Naruto gets transported to the Satellite sector of New Domino City after screwing up the hand seals for the summoning justsu. His deck could be based around either the Infernity archetype ( with Void Ogre Dragon in the extra deck of course) or an Ice Barrier deck. The pairing could be either Naruto x harem, Naruto x Akiza, or Naruto x Sherry.
YeagerMeister31 chapter 14 . 6/2/2019
Well, that was pretty cool nice fights and another Dragoon lol.
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