Very interesting. I enjoyed reading it

Perfection! I wish there was more but I love what I got

Lovely quick read. Thanks for taking the time to write it.

Lovely story!

what a delicious piece of writing! I am in love with your Killian and Emma... eek! on to read some more of your stunning offerings!

I really liked this 1 shot a lot, well done...

So good! And the ending was just too sweet! Well done! Awesome job!

Can't believe I only just read this awesome one shot! I love it and I really love your writing!

I don't know how it is that I am just now finding your writing because holy freaking crap I am so in love with the way you write! This story was off the charts hot and amazing! You have a way of writing these two that makes their chemistry off the charts smokin hot! Oh please, please continue to write for this fandom!

Brilliant!

it's 4:13 a.m. in my part of the world, I just finished reading this and I'm flailing around like crazy! I LOVE this story, the verse, how you characterized Emma and killian...I wish there was more from this verse! well done :)

AMAZING! i laughed so hard when killian's first thought after seeing the lingerie was 'i don't wear bras' . what a dork
and your description of emma is pretty great too. especially the awkward cutie

Wow amaZing I hope u do a continuation

This could become a multi-chapter fic? :)you left them somewhat open/unresolved. Hmmmmmm. Possibilities. :)

Omg, I loved this! The writing was super on character and the premise of the story was engaging and just the type of reading I like. I hope I can read some more of your work later :)