I loved this fic and I read through it pretty fast too because of how interesting it was! Great concepts loved how you handled your characters and their growth throughout and the cool spin you put on things to make them more interesting! Stoked to read the sequel and I hope your having a good one :)!

Uh, Dende healed Vegeta from near death. Like Vegeta was about to DIE, and their was ZERO side affects. Dende had just unlocked his healing and had borderline no experience with it. So why the fuck can he only semi heal a lesser injury as an older much more experienced healer? I think you just want to shoe-in a injury for later w/o thinking it through

that defiantly is a better reason than was given in the anime considering goku at the end returned to the planet earth anyways.

Great story! I Wish this was the real buu saga! Thanks.

Oi Goku. Where are you?

Come on Goku. Make your goddamn appearance fast.

Detective Eighteen Holmes.

Oh man. If she digs, she will know who Son Goku is. The Tenkaichi Budokai champion who defeated the Demon King Piccolo.

I love how Goku appears as an almost mythical figure in this story. We haven't seen an iota of Goku since the first chapter. It truly gives the impression that he's permanently gone.

Man I was really worried. To be fair though, Gohan still has amazing self control. With him drunk, I thought he might have turned Corey into a pile of limbs with one punch.

Oh thank fucking god. With this chapter I can tell you follow the japanese characterizations of the DBZ characters. It was so damn annoying in the dub when Goku tried to be like Superman, or Gohan also. The fact that Gohan slaughtered all of these people is a good sign.

And come on, don't do Vegeta dirty like that. It is pretty clear Gohan is hardly training now. Vegeta should easily be stronger now.

Really Gohan? Goku would be needed? Come on. Goku wasn't even there when you were born

Eh Goku. You might want to use King Kai to speak to Gohan for a little bit.

On the other hand ... SHOW GOKU

Man this makes way too much sense. Even if unintentionally, Goku did kill a Kai. There has to be punishment for that.

And somehow I don't think Goku's stay in Otherworld is going to be so pleasant. If he has his body that's a different matter. Of course, this 'punishment' will be null and void once they know Majin fucking Buu is coming.

who are the three other beautiful girls in gohan circle of friends

yes a suit that dosnt look crappy and cheesy but almost power ranger like (more that dark parody movie) nice work and good homage to his grandfather since with ss3 he and goku look like him more.
he is the viligante the city needs much like the hood and batman are for their cities...