So many grammar errors. Far, far too many to be allowed to claim poetic license. All of your chapters contain many grammar and spelling errors.

You're making it sound as if WW is 7-ish months along. At that point mammary stimulation will cause...leakage. As far as the other stimulation is concerned, only a mucoid plug is holding Jonathon inside. Any ...insertions...risk loosening or damaging that plug which will result in premature delivery. A super-powered Amazon shouldn't have any worries but normal woman do. I once knew a woman that had a weak cervix and as a result had problems.

You seem to have given much more thought to the grammar of Greek, Gaelic, and Gaelicized English than to that of actual English. By the way, Diana's native language would be a dialect of ANCIENT Greek, not Modern. Ancient Greek is natural to her whereas Modern Greek and most especially English are foreign.

Increíble :)

Super romantic ! Although, being an Amazon, I would have expected more resistance when I loved Kal and since Kal I loved her sense of possession over her, although I would have wanted more power in the act, the thunder was great

Love the cuteness

Love the bonding of the team and of course love the love between Diana/Clark

So funny and cute love Bruce’s reactions.

Love this story. The first story is so funny and cute

Love this story so much. The Kent family is cute

It was beautiful! Diana always believes in Kal, that's true love

SO SWEET AND NICE.

Love it great job

a passionate piece of poetry...well done!

Nice