Ty for ur work! Really enjoying hayoto and Liliys banter. Very much different from the hot tempered puppy I always see. I hope u survived the college :) I know I'm pretty late to the party but will u b continuing this?

Hope to read more soon.

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Um..., wow... this is certainly different from any KTR fic I've ever read. Tsuna is a tragic person already and I don't like his 'sister'! His 'gift' or curse or whatever is freaking scary and traumatising! Gokudera is hard and a little cold despite his fiery temperament. It's disturbing cuz I've always liked how passionate he is! Yamamoto is struggling, Ryohei killed, Lambo's father is nuts, I don't even know what to think about Chrome and where Mukuro is! And, Hibari! He's frightening! Though, that's par for the course with him. And, I can't even begin to know what to think of Reborn! I really hope that Reborn and Tsuna grow a bond, cuz I've always liked their relationship with one another. How Reborn knows how to motivate and empower and guide Tsuna to opening up the parts of himself that he didn't even know were there. And, how Tsuna touches and melts Reborn's heart... just a little at first, which strikes me as difficult cuz he's never liked getting close to people if he can help it, and the way they just... click. And, I don't mean romantically or anything, just... it's in the manga and the anime, they're relationship with one another isn't set by strict lines, though they've both tried to keep within them, but I do know it wasn't exactly romantic. So, I hope my thoughts of this fic made sense and didn't make you annoyed. I really hope that you update!

No way in hell, you actually left 42 chapters of this amazing story, left it in middle of a fight and rewritte five chapters... To have another writters block... I am frustrated please write the fight...

Wew, this was more intmse than the last one :3

So. This is a intresting concept and the way you wrote is is amazing. When will you update?

Tsuna's ability is can see people's dead, but when, that still a taboo, right?

How long will this story be

Yes! You are rewriting this fic. The first version sux near the end. Why did Tsuna have to be raped and Giotto insane? I also don't like Tsuna's sister that much. She seems too aloof to be a heroine and not enough loving feelings for ger brother to be convincing. Like, she protects him just because he is family and nothing else. Stopped reading and just skimmed and skipping ahead by then.

wait... how did reborn knows about Tsuna special ability when Tomoko his sister dosen't even know?! sorry to say but is a sudden BAM on the face ya-know? I hope u don't rush with the plot but expand it a little more in details please.
I read both your The Weeping Shadow and this. One is too draggy but this is too... compressed? lol anyway I really love your story, is imaginative. I will wait for your next chp, tyt as much as u can~!

Merry belated Christmas too! lovely gift

When will the next one come out u can't not pose for eight months and leave it on cliff hanger

Oh wow! This is gorgeously written! I'm really intrigued by the snippets of each character and their broken life here. I can't wait to find out more! The broken pasts you give just make them seem so much more human than the manga. Please write more soon! Great work!

This is so freaking sad , I felt for them all really ( particularly Lambo ) . You crushed my heart with this chapter . Very good job , keep it up !
lazyass out !

I like this new version. The plot is more well though and the characterization is better than the first version. I hope u will continue this.

This is depressing and the sad thing is I can't stop reading.