I really enjoyed your 4 chapters! I actually read this a while ago. I decided to come back to it because I grew a liking to Kazuo... Is that weird? I really like how much detail you put into it! I hope you update soon!
Good luck-
Kazuo's first Fangirl,
Leyah

Hey, I followed you here from Fictionpad! Did you end up abandoning it after all? It's been a year since you updated! Haha... well, I enjoyed what was written of this story, so thank you! :)

good luck!

Ehhhhhhh. Omgggg this is the best story ever! I really want to read more of it. Please update!

Ok, good luck on rewriting the story
I support you all the way !

Alright! I will wait! :D I wish you good luck on your endeavors.

Killuaaaa don't be mean!

It seems like she always forgets about her visual power. The story is good though

I love that part when she meet the rock, is hilarius

This is a really good story! cant wait for the next update!

Like the others, this had been a fun read!
I'd just like to ask how many times you proofread your chapters? And what program do you use to write? Just out of curiosity. xD
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Anyway, looking forward to the rest :D

well hi! i love this and i'll be looking forward to the Second Phase!
LMK

The chapter was amazing as usual, Gon was cute (as usual) in this chappy and Killua's the discriminative tsundere as well... no OOCness which is cool :3

Update soon!

I really appreciate the effort you put in making your characters concrete. They are! And they're lovable. Sadly, fanfiction. net people prefer reading about canon folks so they end up not-much-reading these sort of high-potential stories.
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Next time, ONLY if you want to try something else, you should totally add the canon characters from the beginning and entwine your OCs from there.
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Anyway, good job! Looking forward to the rest. :D