Reviews for The Wagner incident
Guest chapter 23 . 11/10/2017
Thanks for the chapter
Anon chapter 23 . 10/22/2017
I would love to find out what happens to shub right now as well as determine what his true power is. Perhaps we can get a cameo appearance from the inquisitor, he seems badass
Mr. Exterminatus chapter 23 . 9/4/2017
Um, no chapter refers to themselves as a legion anymore. That's mind of frowned upon. Legion building is actually a crime.
shadow chapter 23 . 9/2/2017
I liked the chapter!
I Want To Die69 chapter 23 . 8/30/2017
I'd like to see shub's mysterious powers explained first but I'm cool with whatever. Great chapter by the way man.
Bob chapter 22 . 8/18/2017
Amazing, continue.
Guest chapter 22 . 8/17/2017
Good to see this fic again
I Want To Die69 chapter 22 . 8/17/2017
Fuck me it's been a while. I really enjoy this story and glad to see you continue this.
BIBOTOT chapter 21 . 7/28/2015
9 out of 10.

Once again, Shub proves himself the hero of the Imperium. This chapter contains great action, both tactically and in terms of viscera.

And the Orks did what Azog should have done: open tunnels for his troops a bit closer to the enemy.

Awesome. I am eager for more.
bobert64 chapter 21 . 7/9/2015
keep em coming this is quite a fun story and very hereticle lol
BIBOTOT chapter 20 . 7/2/2015
9 out of 10.

That is very good. I like the portrayal of the Catachan as badass jungle fighters who just love to take risk. They were born on a death world; "death" is probably the first word they learn to say. Those dirty Orks got what they deserve.

Shub is my hero. I really like his character and how he develops throughout this story. He went from this nobody working in a manufactorum to a frightened student and now this.

So it's not only the Ultramarines but also the Imperial Fists and the Blood Angels are involved. Interesting. I really wish to see how this turn out.
I Want To Die69 chapter 20 . 6/27/2015
Wow. This is amazing. I love this. You are doing an amazing job writing this story and I love this story. I'm actually typing from Jamaica so I'm using a lot of money. I have a question though, when those space marines had that meeting, why were they so upset about what the highlords were doing? Are they referring to the web way, or the creation of the primarchs? I'm confused.
drSpliff chapter 20 . 6/26/2015
Yes! A update! Hreat chapter and I love how you descibed how shub felt about his little "episode" as well as the consolation he recieved from the sergeant although I expected a much longer chapter considering the time it took to receive a new update. All that aside this chapter is really well done and I cant wait for the (hopefully longer) next update.
Guest chapter 19 . 6/7/2015
space marine blood rage
Guest chapter 19 . 6/7/2015
Chapter 19 is just epic, orks inquisition ultramarines! Loving it...
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