This is good

It is a shame that you quit writing, I really enjoyed the story. While I think that certain spots were overkill or too easy for Naruto to learn, I would read it again.

So far I want to fall asleep and I get the feeling this is more Kishimoto loving crap.

quick C use your Lightning Release: Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar otherwise known in dbz as solar flare

Uhm

Oh my god! You have no idea how excited I am to see you continuing this story again. I'd honestly thought that I would never see another update to this story again...ONly to now find out that your giving up. This was by far the best story I'd read in a long time it was so very well written and for me to find out that it's not likely to be continued really brings me down. I honestly do hope that you change your mind and continue but at the very least I hope we get to see you post the name of the new story for who ever takes up your work. Man finding this out really sucks. Still I hope you change your mind and if you need someone to collaborate with on a plot and ideas for this story there are people on the site you can ask for help. Hell I've been trying to get back into writing my own work for a while but I'd like to beta read for a bit to get that creative spark going again. I certainly wouldn't mind helping you work on this if you really need the help.

nooooooooooo!
i loved this story, it was one of the best kumo naruto fic i have read.
it is a shame to give up this

good chap

Great story. Danzo's really pushing his luck. I am curious about what Hiruzen and Jiraiya have been doing though. I'm glad that at least Naruto has C and Mabui to turn to although I am surprised B hasn't gotten involved, would be interesting if B helped him with the Taijutsu.

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..The academy doesn't start at 10. It starts at five. Chakra doesn't take until then to be able to use, Itachi and Kakashi were already shinobi by Naruto's age, using elemental jutsu and more.

I seriously hate it when people try to kid-proof everything or boost ages just because it doesn't fall within their logic.

great chapter!

Awesome job!

Well, it's a good story, especially for a first attempt, but I think you could use a bit more information about chakra and Justus (form canon that is). The Uzumaki clan was actually best known for their unparalleled skill in fūinjutsu (sealing arts), Kushina's chakra chains were a trait unique to her, perhaps you could play out Naruto's potential as a sealing master? Also, A was rivals with Minato, so perhaps he might take an interest in making Naruto his successor as the "fastest man alive".

great work this story is good and i am looking froward to the next update