that was hilarious :D ..

Nice, but ur the loser.

This was hilarious! I laughed so hard!

sorry peeps for all the miss spells! I forgot to use spell check cause I was tired. Also Bass is on a cooking show Annon so he's at a set/stage. and yes this story is a bit tipsy but lawl who cares XD?!
anyways hope everyone enjoyed :D

This is so much Bull, but this is what entertainment is about: entertaining your readers.

I like it for the bulls**t, but I won't give it much points other than that. You could do with a bit of polishing your grammar and upgrading your vocabulary though.

Other than that, keep it up because I can see you'll make good comedy once you get the hang of writing more well thought pieces.

Nice fic XD I can totally picture X trying to have Zero's hair to himself o.O.

(Something weird that could of happened in X3)

X: Zero your hair is soo beautiful in the wind! -touches-

Zero: Don't touch it!

X: :(

Zero: Fine...

X: YIPPIE :D :D :D -touches-

Zero: -_-

By the way don't regret writing it I freaking loved it :D

5/5

That's nice- But where is this being hosted in?! (Since you know.. no one in their sane mind would let Bass cook in their kitchen.) :D