Loved that introspective Clara beginning, and that serious tinge...before the Doctor got more erratic...kudos for dialogue I could totally hear the. Actually use...a gem of a story thanks!

I love this so much.

"it doesn't take long to refuel the tank"
I'm laughing hysterically at that LOL

Hot hot hot. Loved it!

Very well done! :)

Hm. Interesting to see his occassional random/absent-minded side explored in one of these.

Lovely, beautiful and hot story. Enjoyed it immensely

Really enjoyed that, thanks for writing. I liked the way you tied up the separate little incidents at the end. I also really wish this was canon (it absolutely is in my head). I think you'd do a cracking job of some Mummy related shenanigans too, hint, hint! :)

Wonderful. Captured both their characters so well.

You should do a Doctors POV of this story as I would love to know what was going on in his head.

Pretty Good. I like it. You spot on 12 unstable personality.

An absolutely beautiful story. In every way. D

aaaaaaAAAAAAAAAaaaaahhhhHHHHHH! this is the warble of the fangirl who is freaking out at the perfection that is this fic. I love the possibility of 12/Clara, but never thought I could find fic that pinpointed it, (since the show isn't capitalizing on the possibilities either) but HOLY MOSES you have nailed it here.

Like, wow, the absent-minded nearly scary, totally in-character 12. How he snapped from "mental patient" to "sharper than all the tacks" in the first episode, and I think I will love you forever for your inclusion of "I'm not your boyfriend" which was so much hotter than anyone meant it to be I think.

Anyway, great dialogue and plotting, it plays with the power dynamic of "Clara is is charge, j/k" in a great way, and shows them off as the true partners they can be. :-) Love love love/

This was heart-wrenchingly beautiful and in-character. Bravo!

I want this. lol great one-shot