talk about shit your pants scary i feel sorry for anyone who crosses her path now but i definitely want to see junior and mandy training
1 question though wouldn't mandy just have a nergal demon now or have juniors reaper powers fused with the nergal

Awesome, it has great potential. Please do update soon.

Mandy walks up to the gates of heaven and they just give minnie back out of fear. Thats how they get her back.

o.O dude, ANOTHER Grim Tales fic?
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THANK YOU! lol Not nearly enough of these babies around for my taste, and if I'm correct you might even be touching on some of the ideas we've spoken of in the past. I'm looking foward to seeing how this plays out and what you are going to do with this since its one of the few GT fics of yours that A. I had no hand in coming up with. B. I had no hand in helping with. C. You never even HINTED at something like this, and D...you're teasing me with pairings here ;P

Many you have as being very close to her canon self, honestly I think this is the closest I have seen you or anyone get to writing her as Bleedmen does. She is cold, cruel, all around she is a b***, but only when actually visable to anyone. When no one is watching and no one can see her she seems to be a bit different, such as when she left that gift for Minnie. In this case within the confines of the stomach she was somewhat...motherly towards Jr, though I'm not 100% sure if that was out of some maternal reason or just her being pragmatic.

Speaking of pragmitism, kudos on the fight scene Mandy was effecient, tactful, resourceful and pragmatic. Such as the spikes impailing her, she immediatly took advantage of the fact it gave her a grip on her enemy that she could use (the shortfall of any rope/chain weapon). Her taking the thorns and making improvides knives, another good bit there. Keeping Jr from being snatched away after she got her hands on him though was her smartest move (though it remains to be seen her exact reasons for making it)

After Jr woke up she switched back to Queen B*** mode, in character and perfect lol

I do have some ideas I can toss your way in one area though, her speaking in Nergal, I have something you can use for that.

My only complaint with this chapter is that while understandably short (since its the first chapter of the fic) I felt that the fight was a little too short and on the weak side compaired to your normal work. Typically you do really good fight scenes, even if its completly one sided it goes longer than this. I get that you wanted to get to the setup at the end of this chapter to get going with the story, but I just felt like you rushed a bit.

That aside, no complaints and no real issues. One or two tiny grammar issues:

Than the moment was over and the pair returned to their senses

Should have been:

Then the moment was over and the pair returned to their senses

But just tiny things. Great work mate, I cant wait to see what you do with this! Keep up the good work!

I just found out you created a story.

I love the idea concept her.

Mandy

She more badass and believable this way. It also strange that she would seem to favor Grim Junior and destroy the remain of Minnie Corpse. Maybe it the fact that Grim Junior the Black Sheep of the family like Mandy was back in the Mortal Realm or maybe having something to do with Grim Junior Biological Father. The idea of Mandy ALSO being a Nergal-Reaper is great. I love Mandy mad Assassin and Combat skills, BUT she needs some form of Supernatural powers herself, besides commanding Supernatural Beings.

I just hope Minne spirit comes back from Heaven Gate, sense she has incests feelings for her brother Grim Junior and was rejected by Heaven because of these feelings.

Your Questions

1) How much of Junior's powers did Mandy Get?

Probably about a good portion, BUT Grim Junior has Majority of power. Like say Mandy has 49% of Nergal-Reaper Powers and Grim Junior has 51% of the Nergal-Reaper powers. Grim Junior should be stronger sense he is Mandy and Grim Senior heir and was the FIRST Nergal-Reaper. Mandy the SECOND Nergal-Reaper. Grim Junior has more power and potential, while Mandy has Skills and Techniques to make her dangers with the Nergal-Reaper Powers.

2) What kind, if any, connect do they now have?

Maybe Grim Junior and Mandy can see into each other's Heart's or Mind. Like Grim Junior and Mandy briefly felt/saw how they feel with their current lives and have some understanding as to WHY Mandy acts like a cold bitch and why Grim Junior is a bit of whiner and moody kid at times.

Sort a like seeing each other faults and good points. Maybe a slight emotional attraction to each other for understanding each other.

3) How will the Grim Clan get their Princess back?

Minnie will get rejected by Heaven because of her incest-love she has for Grim Junior and stick with a BIT of the "Grim Tales" Cannon/series.

I could see Minnie waiting at Heaven Gates and Grim Senior/Grim Family coming to get her and bring her home.

4) How is this turn of events going to effect Junior, Mandy and the rest of the Underworld?

Grim Junior will probably attract more powerful/royals of the Underworld more. Maybe powerful/royal beings in the Underworld will wonder how to exploit Grim Junior. Wonder if Grim Junior influenced by his Mother Mandy and who has the most power as the NEW Nergal-Reaper species.

Mandy will be MORE of threat. Sure, Mandy had power and intimidation before, BUT she never had her OWN Supernatural power besides her OWN Evil she contains. Really, some the Underworld Lords/Ladies will be cautious such as a Abedeer Huntsmen of the Night-o-sphere and Walker of the Ghost Zone. Aku and Kare/Him might try something, BUT they will be cautious with their plans.

The Underworld will be both freighten and awed of new power the Grim Clan has with Mandy and Grim Junior.

5) What will Mandy do with her new found Demon-Reaper powers?

1st, Mandy will test her powers. Like a Gun/Sword or whatever weapon, you got to figure out the limitation of what it capable of. So, Mandy will have to test herself what she capable of: How much her body changed, what her Nergal-Reaper power specialize, can she attack from short, mid or long-range and whatever.

2nd, Mandy will measure her power as a Nergal-Demon and compare it to the other Lords/Ladies of the Underworld. Try to get an idea if her Supernatural Powers as a Nergal-Reaper can defeat Walker, Abedeer, Kare/HIM, and Aku. I figure Mandy would not have to WORRY about Walker and Abedeer, but question if she could defeat Kare/HIM and Aku for their wide variety of powers and their experience of being the OLDIEST Demons in the Underworld.

6) How the hell is Minnie going to react to her mother killing her nergal and becoming a Demon-Reaper?

First, Minnie will be somewhat shocked, because she lost some her Supernatural power and it was apart of her. Minnie probably liked her powers and loved using some her abilities in Private for her own personal enjoyment.

Second, Minnie will feel jealous of her mother for being a Demon-Reaper. Minnie wanted to be closer to Grim Junior and Minnie will notice that being Demon-Reapers might have some form of connection with each other. For Nergals like Minnie she connected to Nergal Senior (Grandpa) and Nergal Junior (her Biological father). Minnie will observe and notice that Grim Junior and Mandy are somewhat closer to each other. Minnie might view Mandy as competition for Grim Junior attention and feelings.

Third, a bit of sadness/depression for losing her powers and feeling it her fault for Halloween Town. Minnie will hate how she let Buggie Oggie minon the Pumpkinator kill her and that lead to Grim Junior bonding/losing control of her Nergal. Also, Minnie will be sad/depressed/scared on what Grim Junior thinks of her feelings towards him now that Grim Junior knows how Minnie feels about him.

I will write my own questions and suggestions in the next review.

Thanks for creating this story and keep up the good work.

I put off reading this for awhile...that was a bad idea, such an awesome story as always, and I kept thinking of the brain meteor episode!

Great fic. Keep it up please. Update soon. Your fics are great.

I have to think Minnie is going to be a bit jealous of her mother's deeper connection to Junior...

Great first chapter.

Another great story idea with a very interesting twist.

Mandy with Nergal and maybe Reaper powers. That's a very scary combination.

Is HIM's theory about Junior having the ability to control Mandy true? Can't wait to see what happen's next.