It's cute :D the Akakuro moments are not really rushed I think. And I love how the GoM have their own moments. I also kind of miss their Teikou Days.

It was good :)) I like thiss.. not realy AkaKuro's centered, but the moment's still lovely! XDD

Well, i'd like to give you some advance.. it would be nice if you italyzing the thoughts or give a '...' to make it different with naration, so the reader won't get confused :)

I don't know what to comment anymore, so, Keep Writing! :D