I hope this isn’t offensive.
But because I think it’s kinda funny I am officially calling Cyril, Cereal because on how I pronounce the name (because I don’t know how it’s actually pronounced) it kinda sounds like cereal.

It is great, so far I think you have put a lot of hard work into the story. I am really excited for the next chapters.

Its ok so far but pllsssss I am begging you let shadow be shipped with sunset shimmer trust me

Amazing chapter

I knew you would

That was weird.

I didn't know Shadow needed a motorbike. or had one.

Ohhh! Shadow's from, I knew it! I wonder if he's gonna get mad at Pinkie Pie! Oh, and hello the doctor! *imaginary friend in background* Don't you start that! *Me again* Oh stop spoiling my fun!

Finally at least I know this hasn't been abandoned

Sigue! Te esta quedando genial!

Oh I smell love in the air. What's going to happen next with these two?

Dammit Cyril don't u think people have shipped him with sunset already!? I mean cmon rarity and fluttershy are better choicies

CYRIL HAVE U ABANDONNED IT!?

Spike rolled out of Twilight's backpack once Shadow set her free. "By the way," said Spike. "I'm Spike."
"You can talk?" Shadow said.
"Oh, yes," said Spike. "and in my world, I'm not a dog. I'm a ferocious fire-breathing dragon!"
"Then why are you SO CUTE?" Shadow exclaimed.
"I'm a baby dragon," Spike replied.
"What's all this about dragons?" said a familiar voice. It was Rarity, Spike's crush who went to check Twilight's homework. "By the way, new guy, my name is Rarity."
"Rarity," said Shadow. "that's a cool name."
"Principal Celestia told me to check your homework," said Rarity.
"Okay," said Twilight.

(I decided to make this story into Equestria Girls Alternate Ending.)
Twilight Sparkle was about to go back to Equestria, but when the portal closed, her arm got stuck in it. "Help," she said.
"Are you OK over there?" said a totally unfamiliar voice.
"Who are you?" Twilight asked as she turned round.
"I'm Shadow Eclipse," said the new guy. "and you are?"
"Twilight. Twilight Sparkle." Twilight explained.
"Cool name," said Shadow. "and what a pretty castle."
"That's a school," said Twilight. "it's called Canterlot High School."
"Shall we go into Canterlot High School?" asked Shadow.
"Sure," said Twilight.