at this point I can't even read it anymore. I mean it sounds like you've given Natsu the Sensui effect...to many personalities

Wait how could they make a guild Jellal, Ulter, and Meredith are criminals in the eyes of the Grand Magic Council so they wouldn't be able to

i like the end of this chapter because it tell you what happens in the future without telling you all the details

very good story I think the weird power thing was a bit unnecessary but it ended well

This story is good but I think Flame should have told them everything of his point of view and also see that they did a mistake. Also Lucy has caused this bullshit herself and I wanted to see how they felt guilty.

Good story

Dude great story i would love a sequel but you said you wernt going to makw one loved blaxe and inferno

I would love a sequel this story really is quite amazing hypothetically I would like to see them find out natsu is innocent and a bit of forgiveness on both sides

sequel?

you shouldn't leave it like this. you should do something when Natsu is forced to tell fairy tail what really happened

That was good i like that story

So I was asking around for some Metsu fanfics... and a friend of mine kindly recommended yours. I must say, I really enjoyed it. 3

I really loved the scene where Natsu made a fort with Meredy, and Jellal forced them to take it down right after. XD That was hilarious!

I have to admit that I am quite upset to see that this is finished, but that's alright. I'm so happy I was able to read it while I could. :) And it gave me motivation to continue mine too. 3

I'm happy I got to read your story! It felt REALLY REALLY rushed though. All of the battles and the romance at the start all came (and for the battles, went) so fast. But I speak from experience when I say that I know that it's hard to contain your pairing for as long as possible. Though you should really make sure battles are a LOT more descriptive and time-consuming. I know it's a pain but what can you do? :/ Otherwise, I'm happy to have read a good NatsuXMeredy fic.

This is my first review on your story (I like to review at the end of things)
Its a really great story and ending, I'm sad that there won't be a sequel :(
Your a really good writer but need to work on your grammer a little bit.

Excellent chapter!
Marriage!

AntiNalu