Ah yes, the obsessively overprotective seeker dad. This pleases me.

Define "soon".

When are you releasing the rewrites?

I'm so EXCITED!

Rewrite

Just post the fact the rewrites are out in another chapter of this when the come out kay? please?

I think you should rewrite this story as I quite enjoyed reading it.

I actually think this is a funny story, but if you want to rewrite it, it’s your story. Whatever makes you comfortable dude

i didn't think this story was/is bad, deffinatly still salvagable, but if you want to rewrite I'm deffinatly not against

I wrote the same review from Deceptus! I like this story as well!

Just let it. It is actually pretty good the way it is.
I would love to see what else u have planned for this story.

Thank you for this chapter but if this is the end of the story I thank you for letting me read it I really love this story Ps if you don't want to continue making your story that's okay but I would love to see what happens in the story

I think if you feel like they need to be rewritten then they should but leave the old version up till you have the first few chapters up or at least to where your currently at.

If your taking suggestions maybe have this one start after the Omega lock is destroyed that way you can add new bots and Predaking.

The decision is ultimately yours I'm behind what ever you do.

Both keep the original and do a rewrite

You could have Miko trying to fly with success that surprises the Autobots and Deceptions.