Nicely told.

I JUST REALIZED THIS ENTIRE STORY IS BASED AROUND MERLIN USING A “NO YOU” CARD ON ARTHUR. FFS—
I’m not done yet, but this is bloody amazing.

Poor Percival must have been gutted. I wonder what he would do out of a feeling of guilt.

Aww, beautiful and hilarious!

This story was beautiful. The only extra I would have added was some Gwen!

Arthur...never use peoples parents against them. They will more likely than not ingure you in some way shape or form.

You're objective, I like it.
Ok so your story, it was absolutely hilarious. I can totally see this conversation happening where Merlin is telling off Arthur, and Merlin losing control a bit.
This is also one of the few stories that I've read that have Arthur turning into a child instead of Merlin. Somehow I find that the whole incident very 'Merlin-like'. It was adorable when Arthur sparred with the knights, and how he let Merlin sleep in.
The way you describe the actions of the characters are very detailed, and not to the point that it seems like you're trying to hard.
I found it terribly endearing, and at some points it did hurt my heart, at the end. It was overall very entertaining, and a job well done.

It was really cute! I think that I would like to see Merlin as a child. I bet it would be SO cute!

I loved it! So amazing and sweet!

Hi there. After getting your PM this morning I felt a bit bad that I forgot to leave a review. I was reading this story on my way out the door yesterday morning, bookmarked it, and then completely forgot!
Anyways, I absolutely loved it.
Stories where characters get turned into kids are some of my favorite but I've noticed recently (and this might be because I'm still a bit new to the fandom and haven't gotten to look through all the fics) that almost all of the ones I've read have Merlin turning into the child instead of Arthur so the fact that it was the opposite in this story was cool. I think my favorite parts were Arthur fighting the knights/getting knocked out and every time Merlin carried him. It created such an adorable picture in my head, haha!
I actually enjoyed the slashy undertones in the story even if they technically weren't supposed to be there (being a Merthur shipper too, I see them everywhere even when I don't mean to) and I actually had to go back and read the last part again because I completely forgot Arthur was naked which for me made the moment even better! Either way, it was a great story and I really love your writing! :)

I like this because it's so cute how Merlin takes care of Arthur, and it shows how much he really cares. I'd like to see it the other way around, though!

A very well written and cute story. Thank you for the brilliant read!

DIDN'T MEAN TO PRESS THE FOLLOW BOX D: Just wanted to favourite it /:
Oh Welll.
THIS WAS SO CUTE :D

Finally. A story without slash. And I love every single moment of it. It's nice not to have unwanted things thrown in your face like you deserve it. Thus, this has to be my favorite Merthur story written by you. Ever.

Wasn't that hard, was it?

By the way, how are your summer holidays?

Hahahah lol
Yeah it's one of my most favourite stoeries - it's all sooooo cute