Reviews for Beyond the Veil
Axe Smelling God chapter 31 . 1/10/2015
I can't believe that shine is really mad at Tallis for living because she was shown up, someone needs to grow up. Loved the final chapter it was the perfect thing to end this story
Axe Smelling God chapter 30 . 1/10/2015
Tallis as victor was a great choice an dim happy with her as vicotr for this game
Axe Smelling God chapter 29 . 1/10/2015
Leven... No I'm going to miss her awkward, loveabke self because she was such a unique character and she seems to be the best character I have ever read about and I can't wait to see who could take her as victor.
Axe Smelling God chapter 28 . 1/10/2015
Glad that Lysander is gone but he did make these games very interesting and I can't wait to see how the games continue on after the sadist was finally killed and its funny to see that it's only one guy verse four girls. Looks like a lady will winning these games this year.
Axe Smelling God chapter 27 . 1/10/2015
Cort- I can't believe he finally fell prey to that mutt with the eyeball hands. It was sad to see him go through the pain he was thrown into and to see someone he could let go to and to me that is the best way to leave the world from.

Etolie- It was sad to see her watch him die and she couldn't do anything to stop him from dying. I feel nervous for making a deal with Lysander but I understand where she's coming from with trying to make it home. I guess you do what ever you can to survive.
Axe Smelling God chapter 26 . 1/10/2015
It's sad to see both Riva and Alfie die they were great together and it sucks either one of hem could win for the other now their memories will fade away as their face fades into the air.
Axe Smelling God chapter 25 . 1/10/2015
Lysander- He is finally out of his rocker and I think that someone needs to chill when it came to these games. Also it seems that someone needs to fly the coop to death land and meet all the people he killed.

Meva- It's nice to see her again she is starting to grow on me and I can't wait to see her on her own again. It also sucks that Charles and Meva and I cant make to the finale together.

Evander- I'm kind of glad he's gone but I kind of like that he was showing some compassion
Axe Smelling God chapter 24 . 1/10/2015
Tallias- Who knew she would given the reins of running the new career pack with only Leven and Evander left. I can't believe that Leven is almost completely immobilized since Dario died. I feel for her they were my favorite mini alliance and Evander I thought Lysander would have killed you by now.

Etolie- She is so sweet under her such hard exterior and I love that about her. I also like how she seems to be the older sister to Corr they are really good together.

Alfie- I thought Alfie was a bloodbath for sure and now we see him killing demon baby mutations someone is really trying to get back home. I also like how he has grown out and become more confident in what he does.

Charles- I'm starting to not like him as much as I did before, he just went through blind rage and murdered Tamarin right then and there In a split second. I also thought Tamarin was a bloodbath for sure until she made it past day three I could have seen her in the final five .
Axe Smelling God chapter 23 . 1/9/2015
This chapter was filled with sadness and pain as the career group finally broke apart. This sucks for district four not having another victor entering the shores of four for another year. I can't believe that Tamarin went out and she escaped I guess I underestimated her when it came to these games. I will miss Dario he was my favorite career besides Leven who is now alone and more freighting than ever to now have to kill Lysabder who murdered her district partner.
Axe Smelling God chapter 22 . 1/9/2015
Gemini- I really think that lysander is completely bonkers and he will slowly go insane after a while and eventually kill a whole bunch of people and a weak person would kill him. I also hate that he is tourtoring Tamarin like that such a sadist.

Meva- She will completely go mental and this would seem to be after a while.
Axe Smelling God chapter 21 . 1/8/2015
Sheen- Who would think that Lysander was completely mental when it comes to the alliance. He is completely nutty and the games have barely begun. I feel for the rest of the careers they just need to get rid of him soon or he'll pick them off one by one. The tribute to die in the alliance with the careers would be Gemini.

Celeste- I love Celeste so much I wish she could be my friend and live here in a time before Panem. She seemed she wouldn't last past bloodbath and she did which Im proud of so much. I can't believe the sweet Meva killed someone who was trying to help her. I will miss you Celeste.

Tallias- it sucks that she isn't the leader of the careers even though she doesn't seem much like a leader and for Lysander to go off on Leven like that was terrible. Who knew he would go completely mental after one day.

Charlie- Keep running and leave Tamarin behind she was bound to die for being a idiot anyway
Axe Smelling God chapter 20 . 1/7/2015
In this story we never see that some tributes are already cracking and it ends them dying for a mistake. Assiasi we can see that he tried to make a plan and it ened up with him dying. A trap wasn't a bad idea and Tamarin was an idiot for chasing him and then not looking at her surroundings which cost her almost her life. That type of reckless behavior is what gets you killed and she ls lucky that Charles was their to save her.

Cort- Even though you were my tributes district partner and she ended up dead doesn't mean I want to see you dead but I kind of do. But his ally Etolie will eventually see no use for him and she will stab in the back sooner than later. I looked up that mutt and it was freaky and I may just check this movie out it seems interesting. Also I can't believe only one day and a mutt was discovered and almost killed them. Classic, just classic for the game makers to do this.
Axe Smelling God chapter 19 . 1/7/2015
Sheen- By far my favorite career from Tallias who I think should make it far along with Celeste and Meva. I hope he takes the reins from Laysander and kill him on the spot of take Gemini and runaway from the group.

Celeste- I feel so bad that she has to go brought this alone and I wish Chiffon was alive to be with her and to keep her company.
If I was a tribute I would head to the city for supplies than go back to the fire side
Axe Smelling God chapter 18 . 1/6/2015
I love the arena idea with the paradise and the Lava to represent the sun or evil I'm guessing and ally he feels. Ash ran to Riva for help and she left him to die I thoguht they had a real connection but I guess it's kill or be killed. Leven I can't believe you became so badass when you shot with your crossbow who knew you would kill so quickly and Chiffon sorry but it was your time and I hope your resting in the clouds.
Axe Smelling God chapter 17 . 1/6/2015
It wa since seeing all the tributes before some of them will take their last breath, have their last thought and Last emotion that will leave their body as they ascend into hevean. It sucks that everyone isn't victor material or will make it past bloodbath. All these tributes have been great to see and I can see most of them as victors and they will never be forgotten.
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