Reviews for Rise of the Revanchist Empire |
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Guest 8 chapter 13 . 5/30 Update please |
Guest chapter 7 . 2/14 well congratulations in this chapter you made naruto incredibly unlikeble with his constant nagging and panicing ... for someone who was incredibly calm for the first 6 chapters it is very annoying to have him suddenly become an annoying little bitch |
Brandon Boodoo chapter 5 . 8/18/2019 Sorry gotta drop this. He has Force he used force push and killed some fucktard that sneaked into his house yethe lets kids beat him?! makes ZERO sense. The force can already kill jonin as you showed and if he trains more he can kill Kage. WHY HIDE?! are you stupid?! pussy shit. |
Po1 chapter 6 . 7/21/2019 Character personalities changing for no reason. Naruto having izanagi when he doesn't have the sharingan and said technique not acting anything at all like it should. Doesn't matter though, as you've already said you don't care what the readers think about it in your note. Your story is riddled with plot holes and you've made it clear you just don't care. Clearly this isn't worth reading. |
Rairi Valelira chapter 13 . 5/26/2019 Come baaaaack |
Rairi Valelira chapter 8 . 5/25/2019 Naruto .goes to the trouble to find lightsaber parts. Proceeds to custom make a lightsaber from scratch |
Monster King chapter 13 . 3/25/2019 Great job |
Guest chapter 2 . 2/8/2019 I know this is dead... but...I like it. I was a huge fan of pentup fury . |
Vyctus chapter 7 . 12/15/2018 you ever gonna update again? this is a pretty good story |
Aegiss chapter 3 . 12/2/2018 Huh, I just realized that Force Push is similar to Shinra Tensei and Force Pull is similar to Bansho Tenin |
Aegiss chapter 2 . 12/2/2018 I'm extremely disappointed in myself. It took me so long to realise that it was a Holocron. I should've known the moment it was described but I only realized after Exar Kun appeared. |
LordofTerror chapter 5 . 10/28/2018 your Naruto is a Fucking joke |
LordofTerror chapter 3 . 10/28/2018 man the improper use of your and you're is really annoying as is the misspellings |
BrentNewland chapter 12 . 8/29/2018 I wish I had read chapter 13 fully before I reviewed. The chapter is short and confusing, I suddenly have no idea what's going on. All this talk of companies is confusing, Naruto's attitude has changed drastically, and why would you need credits to build a star forge? Use foundries to make more foundries, then use them to make the star forge. Once you've built the first foundry, everything except programming and design work is free. |
BrentNewland chapter 13 . 8/29/2018 Love the story. Totally don't understand the first scene in this chapter. Why's he upset that he lost a bunch of shadow clones? |