this a great story

Please continue this! This is really good!
I want to know what happens next! I love it!

Roxanna123

Thank you for your update!333

Moooooore !
This fanfiction is so awesome !

And the truth is revealed! Please update soon.

conty,conty,conty,conty,conty, please

Love the story..it's really cute and the plot is really simple which makes the story easy to understand and nothing too forward to the next chapter! I'm curious of what reishi will do because of his jealousy and how yata will react..

Pssst ReiSaru.. need.. want more. *dies* The MiSaru(SaruMi?) was rather cute though. Sorry if this review is super short, but it's a week day and waaay past the time I should be in bed.

Hm.. A love triangle really does sound nice. But that means someone would have to be unhappy in the end.. unless it ended up a threesome(?) Which would be.. odd. I'm thinking of Munakata being the manipulative(adorable) little shit he is and having a lot of Fushimi-time, if only to make Yata feel like his position as the only person Saruhiko needs(or wants) is threatened, so that Yata gets jealous, and Saruhiko maybe plays along with Munakata, because a jealous seme-Yata is an attractive Yata? And.. I don't know where I'm going with this. I don't know, just have fun with it! It's your story, after all.

Hwahhhhh I'm in loveeeee ; A ;
Saru's just so stupid tryin' to lie to his king and then things went... so cuteeeee ; _ ;
I'm curious about what Reisi's gonna do next :') Plz update 3

I think there should be even more ReiSaru like maybe King and Saru bonding-ish time, with a healthy amount of a shy Saru and or jealous Yata. Because a jealous Yata makes me happy, with large doses of ReiSaru/SaruxBlueClansmen in general. I do really like this so far, though it feels a bit rushed? Dunno, maybe that's just me. Keep up the good work!

You should reconsider the title of your story. I don't particularly mind the F-word being thrown in, but states in its guidelines that: "Entry title and summary must be rated K for all audience. No exceptions."

This is funny and interesting at the same time :)))))) I'm curious! Please update asap! XD