Fantastic!

Gah! Right in the feels!

So beautifully written! Was heart wrenching!

Aaahh.. so bittersweet. I can totally see Luffy holding off his visit to Ace's grave until he accomplished his goal to become Pirate King. Thank you for this lovely fic!

Ahhh, so bittersweet :(

I loved this. n_n

nice

You did a wonderful job

Look. Up in the sky! It’s a bird ... it’s a plane ... naw. It’s MARCO THE PHEONIX! (Some guy: Whut! I thought it was some kind of flying pineapple !)

Very nice, something like this should definitely be canon.

Hope you enjoyed season six.

Haha! Luffy's nickname he gives Marco never gets old. XD And that must have been quite a shock having Marco come so suddenly without any warning or heads up. But I was indeed surprised that he gave the pose to where Ace's grave was.

Very nice fic! :D

I realy liked your story I wish though you would make another part like what would of happen when luffy goes to see the graves or something like that but other then that your writing was great it had everything for this story to feel real. Good jod

I absolutely loved this and I'm accepting it as canon.

I really liked this. I wish that there was more. You did a good job capturing the emotion that goes along with this. I'm sure the crew really is curious about what happened to Ace and everything at the War. Though I am also pretty sure that Luffy won't talk about it. Anyway, great job! :)

-Yvonne

Lovely. I think you have refreshing ideas for the OP fandom and I'm happy to note that the execution was pretty well done too. You have pretty much everyone in character and Marco was an interesting addition, as well as Luffy's decision to go after becoming the Pirate King. I think the meeting the Straw Hats have and Zoro (always so firm once he made a decision, his answer is always no, because Luffy will talk about it if he wants to) was well done too.

Thank you for writing.